The business manager of a televeion station released a memorandum stating to devote increased time to national news and restore the time used to weather and local news to its former level in the late-night news. This recommendation was due to the increase number of complaints from the viewers concerning with the station's coverage of weather and local news, and losing the contarct with local busniesses that used to adverstie during last-night news program. The above argument can be properly evaluated only if the the below three questions are answered.
Firstly, are the local news and weather reports being telecasted legit? If there are compaints from the viewers that are concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news one can assume that the actual happenings are manipulated and then telecasted in the particular station. About the weather there is chance that the prediction is mostly false and people are frustrated with the mistaken report every night who plan thier next day taking the predictions form the stations weather report.
Secondy, why is there a requirement for a local business to advertise over an year. There maybe a possibilty that the advertisement is already reached the people and the business has increase it popularity, or inspite of the adverstisement they have not gained popularity and are planning to shut down thier terms. For instance, a shop has already grown its popularity in making rolls and noodles and hence it doesn't requuired any more advertising, casue the mouth to mouth advertising is enough covering popularity it gained and the business canceled the agreement with the station saving extra bucks.
Finally, does restoring the weather and local news timing to its former level guarantee that the businesses doen't actually terminate its agreement with the television statemetn? If a business plannes to invest its money for advertising it does so no matteer the money, area and time. Once it decides to drop the agreement to save itself money it severes the bond. It could be a case where the business is in loss and needs to save money .
If the above is considered to be true, then the arugument as it stands now is flawed. More evidence is needed for proper investigation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
...ts from the viewers concerning with the stations coverage of weather and local news, and...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 514, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ument can be properly evaluated only if the the below three questions are answered. Fi...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 514, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ument can be properly evaluated only if the the below three questions are answered. Fi...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
...the viewers that are concerned with the stations coverage of weather and local news one ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... for a local business to advertise over an year. There maybe a possibilty that the...
^^
Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...n making rolls and noodles and hence it doesnt requuired any more advertising, casue t...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...so no matteer the money, area and time. Once it decides to drop the agreement to sav...
^^^^
Line 4, column 436, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...iness is in loss and needs to save money . If the above is considered to be true...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 2260.96107784 83% => OK
No of words: 370.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06756756757 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72336988996 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 204.123752495 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521621621622 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6891561218 57.8364921388 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 23.324526521 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.70786347227 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376599657494 0.218282227539 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113657990587 0.0743258471296 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141607756063 0.0701772020484 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179393122442 0.128457276422 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1668283561 0.0628817314937 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.3799401198 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 98.500998004 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
...ts from the viewers concerning with the stations coverage of weather and local news, and...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 514, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ument can be properly evaluated only if the the below three questions are answered. Fi...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 514, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ument can be properly evaluated only if the the below three questions are answered. Fi...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
...the viewers that are concerned with the stations coverage of weather and local news one ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... for a local business to advertise over an year. There maybe a possibilty that the...
^^
Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...n making rolls and noodles and hence it doesnt requuired any more advertising, casue t...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...so no matteer the money, area and time. Once it decides to drop the agreement to sav...
^^^^
Line 4, column 436, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...iness is in loss and needs to save money . If the above is considered to be true...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 2260.96107784 83% => OK
No of words: 370.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06756756757 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72336988996 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 204.123752495 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521621621622 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6891561218 57.8364921388 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 23.324526521 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.70786347227 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376599657494 0.218282227539 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113657990587 0.0743258471296 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141607756063 0.0701772020484 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179393122442 0.128457276422 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1668283561 0.0628817314937 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.3799401198 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 98.500998004 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.