Curriculum is something that is designed by a faculty member in the orginazation with a group of experts. It includes what the course structure is like, what are all the subjects that they intend to teach and those emerging electives that make students ready to tackle the so called merging problems. With same curriculum throughtout the nation until students enter the college, the nation is going to prosper than it previously was.
Firstly, it would be unreasonable to ask a teacher to teach a currriculum that is not prepared by themselves. If a curriculum is prepared by themself it shall include the subject the faculty is highly trained in. Since the sujects or courses include a wide variety of subjects in a national curriculum, a huge number of mentors with different subject to matter expects are needed to teach studnets. Institutions will need more number of faculty members to tackle this problem even more with the present emerging technologies like AI, Robotics, Machine Learning, Nano-medicines. When it is a problem fo the institutions on oone hand it is definitely a employeement oppurtunity for the scholars with great degrees.
Secondly, there won't be any distinction between rich an poor. As the curriculum is same throughout the country one can study in a less expensive college and graduate almost equally graded with the ones in highly expesive colleges. Though the ambience and the availabity of labs may differ in the colleges, the amount of knowledge shall almost be on the sma level.
Finally, same curriculum until the college represents having subjects like medicine and engineering taught together along with commerce and arts. Students will have exposure to almost all the required fields of life. It would definetely help them to decide what they are willing to do having experienced all the field equally. Later in the life when one is having a hard time doing CPR who only took commerce in his curriculum, can be outshined by the one who had national curriculum study that includes all the subjects.
In conclusion, as mentioned above national curriculum does more good for the studeents than it was with diversified curriculum where the subjects are constrained and restricted only to specific fields taught and know by the faculty incharge.
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 50
- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station Over the past year our late night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news During this time period most of the complain 66
- The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Movies Galore a chain ofvideo rental stores In order to reverse the recent decline in our profits we must reduce operating expenses atMovies Galore s ten video rental stores Since we are fam 66
- Schools should do more to prepare students for the non academic aspects of adulthood Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain the reasoning for the position you take In developing 58
- Some people think it is better for one single legal system throughout the world Others say countries should have their own law To what extent do you agree or disagree 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10427807487 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85028869974 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53743315508 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5555185415 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.3125 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206360379073 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068333726952 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618446095565 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118721432215 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527315586432 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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