Legal system is the one that handles all the functioning in the world and maintaines clean and prosperous environment. Maintaining a legal system ensures that there is a significant reduce the the crimes or illegal activities committed in the society. Countries owning their own legal systems are more likeing to progress better and functioning without any prejudice. Certain areas need to own their own legal systems for three reasons.
Having a single legal system around the world doesn't accurately provide its assitance to very part of different countries. The legal system does need a lot of money and its revenue is, obviously, collected from all the people around the world. Imagine paying your hard earned money to develop and decrease the crime rate of a certain place miles away from you which doesn't even benefit you in anyway ,unless you are leading a great life and want to be some philanthrophist. A single legal system cannot respond to each and every issue they get on the daily basis sitting in one cornor of the house not knowing exactly what is happening the area.
The world is a well diversified place and one might finding people belonging to similar community in a place or groups of different community in another. Legal actions differ from places to place according to the people living the area. A single legal system finds it difficult to provide the authority required in different parts of the world surrounding different communities.
Legal systems should lend to improve one's quality of life without detoriorating others. For example, take a palce with high crime rate and a place which is peaceful , a single legal system would focus on the place where the crime rate is more and doesn't bother about the peaceful place. Eventually the peaceful place might endup turning into the place with high crime rate.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ures that there is a significant reduce the the crimes or illegal activities committed ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ures that there is a significant reduce the the crimes or illegal activities committed ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... a single legal system around the world doesnt accurately provide its assitance to ver...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...certain place miles away from you which doesnt even benefit you in anyway ,unless you ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 390, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
... from you which doesnt even benefit you in anyway ,unless you are leading a great life an...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... which doesnt even benefit you in anyway ,unless you are leading a great life and ...
^^
Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... Legal systems should lend to improve ones quality of life without detoriorating o...
^^^^
Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...crime rate and a place which is peaceful , a single legal system would focus on th...
^^
Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... place where the crime rate is more and doesnt bother about the peaceful place. Eventu...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97727272727 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54471433682 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0986833993 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286069604354 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111373800354 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058251776399 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172686870557 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718122810668 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ures that there is a significant reduce the the crimes or illegal activities committed ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ures that there is a significant reduce the the crimes or illegal activities committed ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... a single legal system around the world doesnt accurately provide its assitance to ver...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...certain place miles away from you which doesnt even benefit you in anyway ,unless you ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 390, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
... from you which doesnt even benefit you in anyway ,unless you are leading a great life an...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... which doesnt even benefit you in anyway ,unless you are leading a great life and ...
^^
Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... Legal systems should lend to improve ones quality of life without detoriorating o...
^^^^
Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...crime rate and a place which is peaceful , a single legal system would focus on th...
^^
Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... place where the crime rate is more and doesnt bother about the peaceful place. Eventu...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97727272727 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54471433682 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0986833993 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286069604354 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111373800354 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058251776399 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172686870557 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718122810668 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.