“If we want to save money on municipal garbage disposal fees, we need to encourage our residents to recycle more. Late last year, our neighboring town, Hayesworth, passed a law requiring that all households recycle paper and glass, or pay a fine. Since that time, Hayesworth has seen its garbage disposal costs significantly decrease. If we implemented an advertising campaign encouraging our residents to recycle, Masontown would also save money on disposal of its waste.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The letter submitted to the editor of the local newspaper in Mansontown presents us with an idea and an oppurtunity to reduce the spending on the garbage disposal fees and alternate methods to be implemented to acheive this. The intent and the motivation behind this should be appreciated and lauded but because of lack of proper research, lack of information and not addressing some key aspects the letter does not have adequate weightage to supoort itself. Some of the flaws and questions which are missing are as follows.
Firstly, each and every household in Masontown do not the have currect equiment and knwoledge on how to recycle stuff. A very few percent of people would have the current equipemnt need to perfom recycling in their backyard. IF a law was imposed similar to the one in Hayesworth there is a very high probability that people will just resort to paying the fine rather than investing heavy amount of money into buying equipment and even after paying money to accquire the equipment they would have to do all the recycling work themselves, rather they pay the fine and get done with it would be a very convienent option for them. Therefore instead of imposing laws which were imposed in Hayesworth a new and creative approach should be thought off and implemented which could overcome these flaws.
Secondly, there is no information about the population of Hayesworth, it is very possible that the population of hayesworth is half of Masontown due to which imposing such a law would have been easier and also achieiving such significant cost deduction in such a small amount of town is only points to the fact that the number of people in the town would be less. Moreover, there is no information provided with how Hayeswoth implemented the law what were the statistics involved and how well was this law accepted by the people of Hayeswoth.The lack of such critical information should have been provided in the letter to back its claims. Thereby implementing the same law in our own city would not be feasible. An approach regarding and addressing the needs of a bigger population should be figured out and implemented rather than just implementing what same law.
Moving on, one of the biggest flaw in the letter is that it clamins that just by implementing an advertising campaign it would solve the problem . There is absikutely no information provided on how the campign would take place and the biggest and most important aspect is that where will the money come from to run this campign because to run a successful campign requires a lot of money. Moreover even if somehow investors can be found to fund the campaign.There is no gurantee that it will be a successful one and yield the intended results.
In conclusion, the idea presented in the letter to the editor of the newspaper of Masontown shows positive intent to find techniques to reduce the garbage disposal fees and save some moeny but due to lack of information and key aspects of data not being presented in the letter does not provide sufficient backing to buregon its idea and claims.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 530 350
No. of Characters: 2522 1500
No. of Different Words: 238 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.798 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.758 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.635 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 175 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 132 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 97 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 65 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.311 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 460, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...e adequate weightage to supoort itself. Some of the flaws and questions which are missing a...
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Line 3, column 742, Rule ID: THINK_OFF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of'?
Suggestion: of
...and creative approach should be thought off and implemented which could overcome th...
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Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...law accepted by the people of Hayeswoth.The lack of such critical information shoul...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...sing campaign it would solve the problem . There is absikutely no information prov...
^^
Line 7, column 390, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...essful campign requires a lot of money. Moreover even if somehow investors can be found ...
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Line 7, column 459, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...stors can be found to fund the campaign.There is no gurantee that it will be a succes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 11.1786427146 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 55.5748502994 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2563.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 528.0 441.139720559 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85416666667 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.56307096286 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71864144828 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 204.123752495 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 794.7 705.55239521 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.8473053892 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.817134554 57.8364921388 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.866666667 119.503703932 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 23.324526521 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.70786347227 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128763465834 0.218282227539 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043368803601 0.0743258471296 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356822568639 0.0701772020484 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663172876258 0.128457276422 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441711069714 0.0628817314937 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 14.3799401198 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 48.3550499002 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.197005988 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 98.500998004 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.1389221557 144% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.9071856287 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.