In a laboratory study of two different industrial cleansers, CleanAll was found to remove 40% more dirt and kill 30% more bacteria than the next best cleanser. Furthermore, a study showed that employees working at buildings cleaned with CleanAll used far

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In a laboratory study of two different industrial cleansers, CleanAll was found to remove 40% more dirt and kill 30% more bacteria than the next best cleanser. Furthermore, a study showed that employees working at buildings cleaned with CleanAll used far fewer sick days than employees working in buildings cleaned with other cleansers. Therefore, to prevent employee illness, all companies should use CleanAll as their industrial cleanser.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

The Argument states that a study of two different industrail cleansers was conducted,where it is found that CleanAll removed 40% more dirt and killed 30% more bacteria than the other cleanser.We could not surely say this is valid information as we need more data like conditions where they were used,number of clenaers considerd for the other cleanser etc.The Argument also states that employees working at buildings cleaned with CleanAll used fewer sick days than employees working at buildings cleaned with other cleansers.Now we dont know what types of buildings are this,if employees used sick days only when they were sick.

Firstly the argument assumes that CleanAll removes more dirt and kills more bacteria than the next best cleanser.Now we dont know from how many different cleansers,the second cleanser was selected and also there could exist another better cleanser than the second cleanser which may have not been considered.We also dont know on what conditions the cleaners were used.Consider if CleanAll was used in city office buidlings where there is less dirt and bacteria and the second cleanser was used in some rural office where we would have more dirt then obviously CleanAll will show better results.The Quantities of these cleansers used is also unknown,so if more amount of CleanAll is used,it will show better results.

Secondly,the argument assumes that employees working at buildings cleaned with CleanAll used fewer sick days than employees working at buildings cleaned with other cleansers.These employees taking a hoilday by using sick days could not be sick also.The Validity of their medical certificate should be checked.So if false sick days were used then the employees were not sick and this weakens the assumption.Also we need to know if the buidlings are similar,consider if the buidlings cleaned by CleanAll are in city centre and the buildings cleaned by other cleanser is near a mining or construction site then the probability of employees falling will be high in these buildings as it is near a mine not because of the cleansers used.There could be also chances of employees who are sick reporting to office as they may get a cut in their salary.Now this will also prove the assumption wrong as sick days taken are counted but they do not check if the employee reporting is in good health.

All these instances can weaken this argument.The argument does not stand true as enough data is not provided to validate it.Thus we cannot say that CleanAll should be used in all industrial buildings to prevent employee illness.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.6327345309 148% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 2260.96107784 95% => OK
No of words: 418.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78539592138 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430622009569 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 104.0 22.8473053892 455% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 271.99310653 57.8364921388 470% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 539.0 119.503703932 451% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 104.5 23.324526521 448% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 5.70786347227 298% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 5.25449101796 647% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414640340017 0.218282227539 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256205945417 0.0743258471296 345% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131411693692 0.0701772020484 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256205945417 0.128457276422 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131411693692 0.0628817314937 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 55.1 14.3799401198 383% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.62 48.3550499002 -53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 42.7 12.197005988 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.59 8.32208582834 139% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 12.3882235529 436% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 43.6 11.1389221557 391% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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