Over past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza have steadily decreased while the populairty of skateboarding has increased dramatically.Central Plaza owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza.There is dramatic increase in amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited in Central Plaza, the business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels.
The argument states that over past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza have steadily decreased while the populairty of skateboarding has increased dramatically.It also recommends that the city should prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza.It bases its argument on the following assumptions.First assumption is that decrease in Central Plaza's business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. The second assumption is that there has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza.And on basis of these assumptions, it makes the third assumption that if skateboarding is prohibited in Central Plaza, the business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels.The argument is not substantial as the assumptions made can be proved invalid.
Firstly, the argument states that the Central Plaza owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaze.Now do we know for sure that the skateboarders never shop in Central Plaza?.All shoppers never use skateboards?.If the questions give positive answers then it will weaken the argument as relating the decrease in business with number of skateboarders will be wrong.These skateboarders might be even contributing to the business by bringing more people in the plaza.Is the decrease in business not due to lack of better products?If not,then increasing the quality of products will help the businesses in the Central Plaza.
Secondly, the argument states that there is dramatic increase in amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza.But are all these litter and vandalism caused by skateboarders?.They could be caused by window shoppers or kids which may render the assumption invalid.Without knowing for sure who have caused these damages, we can put the entire blame on the skateboarders.There also could be rival mall people who may be causing damages when the mall is not under supervision.
Lastly, the argument assumes that prohibiting skateboarding in Central plaza will result business returning to its previously high levels.Are you for sure the skateboards do not contribute to businesses at all?If not,then prohibiting them might result in further decrease in business.Furthermore, the cause of decrease might be something else, and prohibiting the skateboards would result in any good change, as the major cause is still there.So we need to understand the exact cause of the decrease in business in Central Plaza.
Due to lack of evidence in data provided the argument is not valid.To make it substantial, we need evidence in favor of the assumptions provided to strenghten their stance.In conclusion, the provided assumptions are not enough to validate the recommendation provided by the argument.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 55.5748502994 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2370.0 2260.96107784 105% => OK
No of words: 436.0 441.139720559 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43577981651 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29405710655 2.78398813304 118% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435779816514 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 22.8473053892 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.624650279 57.8364921388 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 395.0 119.503703932 331% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.6666666667 23.324526521 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.8333333333 5.70786347227 347% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.25449101796 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472603749561 0.218282227539 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255334574189 0.0743258471296 344% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.20896697173 0.0701772020484 298% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247567071311 0.128457276422 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188170371394 0.0628817314937 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.5 14.3799401198 282% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 48.3550499002 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 12.197005988 266% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.46 12.5979740519 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.32208582834 129% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 12.3882235529 234% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 11.1389221557 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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