People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The Decisions or choices a person makes has a huge impact on the way how his life shapes.Even small decisions which may seem insignificant can result in big changes.So a person should try to always logically take a decision.He should put some amount of efforts will making any decision.Atleast a thought about the decision will it be good or bad for me? can help a lot.
Successful people have one thing in common which is that they always analyze a situation they are in and what a decision of theirs can have an impact on them.They never make a decision in a spur of the moment instead they take their time, weigh their good and bad and then arrive at a decision.If powerful business men would have made deals based on how they were feeling that moment would never have been that successful.If a person is in a jolly mood and decides to sign any deal that comes to him, may sign a deal that could incur him huge losses.The one very important benefit of careful scrutinization of decisions can be that it will not lead to any grave harm.
Taking decisions based on emotions might result in harming the person.It is like taking a gamble when you impulsively make a decision based on your emotion.It may end being a good decision or a very deleterious one.So why should we gamble with our life and risk all that we have earned till now.One bad decision can lead to devastation of the person's life.Consider,a boy out of love, entrusts his girlfriend with an access to his bank account, gives all his information to her.But the girl betrays him and runs away with all his money.Now the boy could have prevented this from happening if he did not make the decision of giving her all his bank details based on his emotions.
It is better to be safe and making decions with logic than basd on emotion as the latter could result in good or bad.Making logical choices prevents us from any loss.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55718475073 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59770090318 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533724340176 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 23.0359550562 295% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 264.882917532 60.3974514979 439% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 310.8 118.986275619 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.2 23.4991977007 290% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233649721811 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112551007284 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681424949486 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138970107803 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419896116324 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.1 14.1392134831 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.38 48.8420337079 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.4 12.1743820225 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.35 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.2143820225 260% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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