Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
The author of the argument mentions that as there are very less chances that inoculation causes death of a person--there is no need administrate inoculations against cow flu regularly. However, author fails in providing enough evidences to support his conclusion.
Firstly, author specifies that if vaccination against cow flu if administered regularly, then there will be many lives saved. Which itself contradicts his/her conclusion. Assuming is author is correct, there can be deaths' if inoculations are not managed properly. And author fails to give information about the cow flu spreading. Lets assume if it is a easy spreading disease and many people can affect from in it the rural areas as, there will be more number of cows in the rural areas. even in urban areas disease can be spread from the flu affected areas. For example, if we take example of swine-flu caused by pigs, started in USA and spread across the continents. There were many cases in India where people died of swine-flu. Even if the disease is not originated in India it has been carried by disease affected hosts from other countries and then spreaded in all the areas virally. From then india has made swine-flu vaccination necessary for everyone once a year as a precaution and avoid many innocent beings losing their lives.
So, here author neither provide details of cow flu how danger it can be nor how many does it take to kill a person affected. If we assume cow flu is as harmful as swine flu and it not only affect the people in the place it is originated but it can also spread world wide if proper measures are not take. This statement "Cow flu can be spread easily and it is as dangerous as some flus like swine flu" seriously undermines author conclusion. In order to strengthen his argument the author should consider above mentioned things and provide a maintained report and analysis regarding cow flu.
Secondly, author mentions that there is a small possibility that a person die as a result of inoculation. If we consider the same above example "Swine Flu" case, it is necessary that person might get affected by it. According to many health studies, it is recommended that the vaccination for diseases like polio, malaria, TB, and etc is necessary. Since, one does not know when will be they get affected from which disease.
As we all strongly believe in the old saying "Prevention is always better than cure". So ,there is a need to administer the cow flu inoculations regularly even if there is a small possibility that a person dies. Finally, author fails to provide enough evidences to support his argument and fails to consider important details regarding flu.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 457 350
No. of Characters: 2156 1500
No. of Different Words: 208 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.624 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.718 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.583 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.773 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.702 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.507 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y, then there will be many lives saved. Which itself contradicts his/her conclusion. ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...nformation about the cow flu spreading. Lets assume if it is a easy spreading diseas...
^^^^
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cow flu spreading. Lets assume if it is a easy spreading disease and many people ...
^
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...y spreading disease and many people can affect from in it the rural areas as, there will be...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...more number of cows in the rural areas. even in urban areas disease can be spread fr...
^^^^
Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
... cows in the rural areas. even in urban areas disease can be spread from the flu affe...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...it is originated but it can also spread world wide if proper measures are not take. This s...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...it is originated but it can also spread world wide if proper measures are not take. This s...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 360, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lio, malaria, TB, and etc is necessary. Since, one does not know when will be they ge...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ion is always better than cure'. So ,there is a need to administer the cow fl...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 2260.96107784 100% => OK
No of words: 455.0 441.139720559 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96483516484 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76893422448 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 204.123752495 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472527472527 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6522743246 57.8364921388 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2173913043 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7826086957 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.70786347227 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 6.88822355289 247% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322671196145 0.218282227539 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10115358576 0.0743258471296 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671182023357 0.0701772020484 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17855437945 0.128457276422 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508923842946 0.0628817314937 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.3799401198 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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