Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Innoculations against cow flu could potentially save the lives of multiple people but they can not be routinely admisnistered until they have been tested to be completely safe. This argument is not cogent due to the fact that they are many factors that should be considered before such a decision is made.
First of all, proper analysis should be made to verify just how safe the innoculations are. A success versus failure rate should be collated from thorough reseach on the quality of the medicines used to peform the innoculation.Theoretical and pragmatic evidenced should be garnered by the medical board. Proper evidence on the success rate compared to the rate of failures could show the chances the patients had. For example, if the innoculations did infact have an adverse effect, but only these adverse effects only occured in one in twenty people and accurate data showed that one in five people if not innoculated woud contract and die from the cow flu, then it would be sagacious for it to be administered.
Also, the quality of other drugs which the patients injest should also be observed to determine if these are the cause of the dangers wrongfully appropriated to the innoculations. This called to mind the death palgue which occured in the 18th century in which doctors noticed an increase in the rate of mortality in mothers during childbirth. It was eventually found that the that the reasons for the death, was that the doctors who attended to the mothers had dirty hands. This came after a lot of misdiagnoses and denigration of medications taken by the mothers during birth.
Lastly research on the cause of death of both innoculated and non-innoculated would help the case. It may be possible that the patients who are thought to ahve died due to adverse effects of innoculation simply just died from other diseases from which innoculation of cow flu does not protect them, such as malaria or typhoid. Perharps, the citizens in that area needed innoculation from those diseases as well in other to be completely safe.
It is imperative to say therefore that there is not enough evidence to determine if innoculations shoud be enforced, encoraged or even scraped out completely. The possiblity of it being deleterious should be accurately determine as well as what possible complications could arise if it was completely banned. Also other factors such as other medications taken by the patients and other possible illnesses should be garnered to help make a decision.Therefore,t is imperative to say therefore that there is not enough evidence to determine if innoculations shoud be enforced, encoraged or even scraped out completely.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 21 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 443 350
No. of Characters: 2187 1500
No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.588 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.937 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.845 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 153 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 120 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.688 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.815 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.327 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.327 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Theoretical
...dicines used to peform the innoculation.Theoretical and pragmatic evidenced should be garne...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'that the'.
Suggestion: that the
...ing childbirth. It was eventually found that the that the reasons for the death, was that the doc...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dbirth. It was eventually found that the that the reasons for the death, was that...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ould arise if it was completely banned. Also other factors such as other medications...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...uld be garnered to help make a decision.Therefore,t is imperative to say therefore that t...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , t
...rnered to help make a decision.Therefore,t is imperative to say therefore that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 2260.96107784 98% => OK
No of words: 440.0 441.139720559 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05454545455 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06572629012 2.78398813304 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463636363636 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2898405174 57.8364921388 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.70786347227 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143194213819 0.218282227539 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496662850472 0.0743258471296 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511563574596 0.0701772020484 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879688435158 0.128457276422 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504108590663 0.0628817314937 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.3799401198 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 98.500998004 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 12.3882235529 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.9071856287 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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