In order to alleviate the serious unemployment problem in our town, we should encourage Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area. The Hillview landfill, which has been undeveloped for decades, is a perfect site for this plant. The building and staffing of this plant will put to work thousands of Hillview residents left unemployed after Computech computer software programming company abandoned its national facility last year. I am asking the City Council to authorize a large campaign to attract the company and offer significant tax incentives to make our town attractive to this giant of car manufacturing
he argument presented in the memo for the Mayor, in favor of building a car manfavturing plant in the Hillview landfill area to combat unemployement, though with all the noble intentions, inadvertetntly has numerous unwarranted assumptions and leaves a myriad of unaswered questions.
Firstly, the the argumet fails to take into consideration the skill level, and turns a blind eye to the skill set posessed by the majority of the population. The construction of the plant would require skilled labot ofcourse, and the staffing would need people who are efficient and familiar with working with automated machines. So the skill set required for the staffing for a car manufacturing company is vastly different from the skillsets required by a computer programming company. Since the population appears to be more inclined towards computer based technologies, as is bolstered by the fact that there was a computer software progaramming company before, the car manufactuirng company will not be able to hire the people since they do not have the required skill set. The argument also does not take into consideration the economic status of the population. Will they be able to hire poeple as labors from within the twon or that would require bringing people in from fram off places. Even of they find labors, will it be cost effective for the company to hire the locals, or would cheap labor be available to them from outside.
If the company plans to hire people skilled in programming and train them for the particulat skill set required in a car manufacturing company, that would require a huge investement in the training of the poeple. Will the company be willing to invest in training their employees realizing that they have to unlearn their particaulr skill set and lear new skills from ythe scratch.
Let us suppose that the company is willing to train people, are the people ready to undertake a job that they know is not related to the previous work experience that they have and would require them to learn new things. Even if all falls in place, the efficiency of the work and the quality of product would be jeopardized.
The argument also fails to take into consideration the econimic factors of the town. There must have been a reason why a ComPutech had to abandon their facility. There could have been a lot of unfavorable conditions that must have forced the comapny to take such a strong decision. What is the guarantee that the car manufavturing plant will not face the same fate?
If the plant is built in the area, there are high chances that the company will hire people from around the town from where they can readily get people with pertinet skillset, because after all, it is a product based company and not a charitable organization. It needs to run a business. Though the company would undoubtedly bring employement, it will not solve the problem of unemployemnt of the town in question here.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 496 350
No. of Characters: 2384 1500
No. of Different Words: 224 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.719 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.806 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.704 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 124 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.105 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.616 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.368 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.318 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.576 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he argument presented in the memo for the ...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...d of unaswered questions. Firstly, the the argumet fails to take into consideratio...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...d of unaswered questions. Firstly, the the argumet fails to take into consideratio...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kill set posessed by the majority of the population. The construction of the plan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.9520958084 154% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 55.5748502994 122% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2450.0 2260.96107784 108% => OK
No of words: 496.0 441.139720559 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93951612903 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78052774619 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 204.123752495 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457661290323 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 754.2 705.55239521 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0680684985 57.8364921388 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.947368421 119.503703932 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1052631579 23.324526521 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31578947368 5.70786347227 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868307324246 0.218282227539 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313122675738 0.0743258471296 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352232912277 0.0701772020484 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559293446488 0.128457276422 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382422770157 0.0628817314937 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 98.500998004 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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