Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
The arguments has various loopholes and makes unwarrented assumptions making it flawed.Firstly the argument does not provide the information of the complaints made by the viewers.It only mentions that they received complaints about the coverage of weather and local news and does not provide any insights about the complaint.It could be possible that the viewers are not satisfied with the quality of their news or the viewers consider their news fake and biased.There could be possibility that the viewers completely want the station to remove the weather and local news and focus only on national news as they want to watch only national news at late hours.
Secondly the argument assumes that the loss of the advertising contract is because of the station's changed policy towards news.Considering the complaints of the viewers about the policy and the argument assumes that the loss of the contract is solely because the station has change their late night news program.It could be possible that the local business that use to advertise during the late-night news program are not interested to work with the television station or it could be possible that they have grown some indifference towards the station.Has the arguments provided some solid reasons of the loss of contract, it would still require to prove the lack of interest of viewers in the late night news.
Lastly the argument supposes that restoring the time devoted to the weather and local news it would be able to gain the audience's interest back help the station get back their reputation.But there is a possibility that the viewers have change their interests and are no longer interested in the station news or it could be possible they are interested in some other news agency.
All these unwarrented assumptions makes the argument flawed.
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- Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with 77
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 305 350
No. of Characters: 1503 1500
No. of Different Words: 126 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.179 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.928 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.501 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 50.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 27.793 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.533 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.845 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.174 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n of the complaints made by the viewers.It only mentions that they received compla...
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...rovide any insights about the complaint.It could be possible that the viewers are ...
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...rs are not satisfied with the quality of their news or the viewers consider their...
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Suggestion: There
...ers consider their news fake and biased.There could be possibility that the viewers c...
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...y want the station to remove the weather and local news and focus only on nationa...
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...he stations changed policy towards news.Considering the complaints of the viewers about the...
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Suggestion: It
...as change their late night news program.It could be possible that the local busine...
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...e possible that the local business that use to advertise during the late-night news...
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Suggestion: Has
...n some indifference towards the station.Has the arguments provided some solid reaso...
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Suggestion: But
...p the station get back their reputation.But there is a possibility that the viewers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 55.5748502994 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 2260.96107784 67% => OK
No of words: 297.0 441.139720559 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13804713805 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74638933468 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 204.123752495 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424242424242 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 705.55239521 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 22.8473053892 324% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.712822171 57.8364921388 449% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 381.5 119.503703932 319% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.25 23.324526521 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.70786347227 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.25449101796 266% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267666558642 0.218282227539 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147908062996 0.0743258471296 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903187497516 0.0701772020484 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147908062996 0.128457276422 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903187497516 0.0628817314937 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 14.3799401198 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.63 48.3550499002 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 12.197005988 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.72 12.5979740519 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.32208582834 125% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 12.3882235529 452% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 11.1389221557 284% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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