A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting, lethargy, and other signs of illness. After the recall, the pet food company tested samples from the recalled food and determined that all chemicals found in the food were chemicals that are approved for use in pet food. Thus, the recalled food was not responsible for these symptoms, and the company should not devote further resources to the investigation.
The argument states that because of many dogs falling ill, and as a response to the complaints being lodged by the customers the company decided to recall 4 million pounds of dog food. Dogs were facing symptoms like vomiting, lethargy, etc. and tests were carried out on the food and results approved that the food was not harmful and can be consumed by dogs. The statement also tells us that food company is not responsible for the symptoms and the company should not be called in for investigation again. The statement itself has some unanswered questions that how can many dogs fall ill at the same time ? Is there anything in common consumed? Is the food company lying on their results or are the results being forged? Many question can be called upon
Dogs cannot be fed with the normal food consumed by human, and their food is now available in various different types. The statement states that all the dogs particularly had symptoms such as vomiting, lethargy, and other similar signs of illness. This statement tells us that all the dogs might have done or consumed something that is common to all of them. The question is what all did they consume other than the food company that was called in for investigation, detailed survey of the dogs should be done so as to find out. Sometimes illness can be caused through water as well because sometimes in purification of water some chemicals are used if the amount of chemicals exceed they can cause illness and some health issues. If the dogs falling ill live around the same vicinity then water suppliers should also be called and pH level of water should be checked.
Food companies proud food on generalized basis there might be some dogs for whom it might not be suitable, so the food consumed by the dogs should always be the one which the vet prescribes. Everyone knows that dogs are playful and they always have to be taken care of there is always a possibility that they might consume any harmful material while goofing around. If all the dogs that have fallen ill visit the same garden, then that garden should also be inspected, it might also be the case that there many unknown substances fallen on the ground that might be consumed by the dog.
The biggest concern is how can many dogs fall ill at the same, from this we can come to one conclusion that there is something common with the reason.
So to find out what is the reason it is very important that we observe each and every tiny detail as if it is the highest probability for this situation. Pet animals are very sensitive and should always be taken care because they are bound to consume something that might be erroneous.
Therefore, all the above points I think should be given priority and looked upon. The statement itself could have been more descriptive so that it would have been easy to evaluate the situation, even more data regarding dogs and symptoms would have been of great help.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 15 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 518 350
No. of Characters: 2365 1500
No. of Different Words: 215 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.771 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.566 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.282 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 151 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.156 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.524 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.328 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 724, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many questions'.
Suggestion: Many questions
...esults or are the results being forged? Many question can be called upon Dogs cannot be fe...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ailed survey of the dogs should be done so as to find out. Sometimes illness can be caus...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 44.0 19.6327345309 224% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.9520958084 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 13.6137724551 147% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 28.8173652695 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2416.0 2260.96107784 107% => OK
No of words: 518.0 441.139720559 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66409266409 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.56307096286 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34919881671 2.78398813304 84% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 204.123752495 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426640926641 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.9 705.55239521 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.614999828 57.8364921388 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.047619048 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 23.324526521 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.70786347227 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205068610553 0.218282227539 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748759642835 0.0743258471296 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826473600147 0.0701772020484 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962871516901 0.128457276422 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867040172246 0.0628817314937 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.3550499002 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.5979740519 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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