Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important.
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We always hear this one statement in news now-a-days that digital world is the future, many of the countries have already reached the benchmark of being digitized while many countries are yet to achieve. Mass media and Internet play a prominent role in making this possible. These two have brought our world very close to each other. Few decades back, when conversing with people who lived on the other side of the globe was merely considered to be impossible, the innovation of internet and mass media have now made that possible. Everything has its pros and cons, even internet and mass media.
The issue topic tells us that because people using mass media and internet it has reduced their level of attention span, rather considering it as a negative point it has overall shown positive outlook. Before, the invention of mass media and internet people used to interact socially and indulge themselves in other outdoor activities, but because the invention of mass media people actually like to interact through their mobiles according to their convenience, because of this the importance of outdoor activities is diminishing and is almost not observed anywhere. For example: few years back small children used to play outdoor and other indoor games but now-a-days children those games playing at their respective homes using their personal mobiles.
While enumerating such incidences the list might have abundant examples, but their are various good impacts on the society as well. As the world is getting digitized and their are many technological advancements in every sector. The corporate world has benefited the most. For example: If we consider a XYZ bank few decades back every bank used to prepare balance sheet manually and all the calculation were done on manual basis but because of technological advancement we can get our work done swiftly and in less amount of time hence we can utilize that time in some other work.
Although people might have lost their or reduced their overall attention span, which is actually one of the biggest impact. But because of innovation of internet we are only one step away from getting or knowing what we want just by click of a button. This has made multi-tasking possible and enhanced our cognitive ability and hence we are able to comprehend large quantities of data. I have already stated that everything has its pros and cons, and I still believe that by creating a balance between the good and the bad impact we can achieve new heights.
Therefore, through the points I have stated above I feel that even we are losing and reducing our attention span which is actually wrong and has to be taken care of, but the invention of mass media and internet might have some bad impact on us, we can always cover it and move ahead focusing on the good impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
.... As the world is getting digitized and their are many technological advancements in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92226890756 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51846072249 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493697478992 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.3634515373 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.823529412 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231301737063 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077129716571 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054870441683 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128501167291 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402226658979 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.