raising of children
Citing the recent interviews with children conducted in the villages as evidence , Dr Karp, an anthropologist contends that Dr fields conclusion Tertian Village culture is invalid and that his research methods will produce better results. Dr Karps conclusion is based on assumption that lack evidence and are insufficiently backed, thus are unconvincing.
Firstly, Dr karbs conclusion is based on the assumption that Dr field used a different methodology. Dr karbs proposes using of interviews as a way to come to a more accurate conclusion. However there is no information on the methodology used by Dr Field. Dr field would have used interviews as well to come to his conclusion. If thats the case, there is likely to be the same outcome. Dr Karbs is suggesting interviews , what if thats the exact method Dr Field used. In order to put his assertions on a more sound footing, Dr Field has to provide evidence to show that Dr Karbs used a different methodology to come to his conclusion and thatDr Karbs and how his methodology will produce more accurate results.
Secondly, Dr Karbs bases his conclusion on interviews he conducted on certain villages. we not that there are many villages that are on the island of Tertia. The premises rests of the assumption that the villages all have the same system of upbringing children. Different villages tend to have different system of bringing up children. It is possible that on certain villages on the island, parents are the solely responsible for raising their children, and in other villages, children are brought up by the community. So it is possible that the two anthropologists conducted their researches in different villages on the islands which have different systems. To Validate his claims, Dr Karbs must provide more evidence to show that the systems where the research was carried out was the same as that where Dr field carried out his research.In addition to the , evidence should be provided to show that the research was done on the same village .
Thirdly, the Dr cites interviews as the main source of data collection. in doing so he assumes that children are telling the truth. however, it is known that children are capable of lying. What if Dr karbs as provided inaccurate information by the children he interviewed. Furthermore, children are more inclined to talk more about their biological father. This in no way does it prove that they were solely raised by their biological fathers. to add more weight to the conclusion, Dr krabs must prove beyond reasonable doubt that the information provided by children in interviews was accurate and show how children mentioning their father in interviews translates to being raised by their father.
In conclusion, Dr karbs conclusion rests on many assumptions which have no sufficient information to be backed.In order to substantiate his claims, Dr Karbs must prove beyond reasonable doubt how accurate the information from interviews is.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 487 350
No. of Characters: 2418 1500
No. of Different Words: 185 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.698 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.965 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.829 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 168 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 140 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 108 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 63 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.35 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.712 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.65 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.586 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.195 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 13.6137724551 154% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 28.8173652695 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 55.5748502994 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2479.0 2260.96107784 110% => OK
No of words: 485.0 441.139720559 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11134020619 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93255384116 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 204.123752495 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.39381443299 0.468620217663 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.9 705.55239521 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2613769397 57.8364921388 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.291666667 119.503703932 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2083333333 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.20833333333 5.70786347227 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.67664670659 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177774385645 0.218282227539 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710193391689 0.0743258471296 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991391061925 0.0701772020484 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113232805886 0.128457276422 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12965641414 0.0628817314937 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 98.500998004 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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