A recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order on an individual's levels of stimulation. The study showed that in stimulating situations (such as an encounter with an unfamiliar monkey), firstborn infant monkeys produce up to twice as much of the hormone cortisol, which primes the body for increased activity levels, as do their younger siblings. Firstborn humans also produce relatively high levels of cortisol in stimulating situations (such as the return of a parent after an absence). The study also found that during pregnancy, first-time mother monkeys had higher levels of cortisol than did those who had had several offspring.
According to the argument, a recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order on an individual's levels of stimulation. There are other explanation which also helps to arrive at the same point.
During a stimulative situation such as when afirst born infant monkey faces with the unknown monkey. The infant monkey might think that this monkey is going to harm him. So, firstborn infant monkey produces twice as much of the hormone cortisol. When someother monkeys are trying to harm the infant monkeys mother. At that time infant monkey is not going to be quite. At that time infant monkeys produce up to twice as much of the hormone cortisol.
In human being also the same case. Firstborn humans also produce relatively high levels of cortisol in stimulating situations (such as the return of a parent after an absence). There are some other cases as well where human beings produce relatively high levels of cortisol. Whenever humans become very angry towards someone, they will start to criticise them. During which their mind is not in control. Therefore at that time also human beings produce relatively high levels of cortisol.
Not only in amimals and humans produce relatively high levels of cortisol, in case of birds also it is the same case. When birds lay their eggs in the nest’s and when snake tries to eat the egg’s at that time bird’s also prouce high levels of cortisol.
Therefore monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order on an individual's levels of stimulation. There are other explanation which also helps to arrive at the same point.
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Sentence: Not only in amimals and humans produce relatively high levels of cortisol, in case of birds also it is the same case.
Error: amimals Suggestion: animals
Sentence: When birds lay their eggs in the nest's and when snake tries to eat the egg's at that time bird's also prouce high levels of cortisol.
Error: prouce Suggestion: produce
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 274 350
No. of Characters: 1308 1500
No. of Different Words: 122 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.069 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.774 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.346 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.37 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.558 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.136 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... twice as much of the hormone cortisol. When someother monkeys are trying to harm th...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: QUIET_QUITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'quiet'? 'quiet' means 'silent', 'quite' mean 'very' or 'to a moderate extent'
Suggestion: quiet
...t time infant monkey is not going to be quite. At that time infant monkeys produce up...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ing which their mind is not in control. Therefore at that time also human beings produce ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...s also prouce high levels of cortisol. Therefore monkeys provides clues as to the effect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, therefore, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 2260.96107784 60% => OK
No of words: 274.0 441.139720559 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9598540146 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47346458756 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 204.123752495 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43795620438 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 705.55239521 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5795076398 57.8364921388 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.5 119.503703932 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 23.324526521 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.70786347227 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371661685617 0.218282227539 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141028839541 0.0743258471296 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175450474913 0.0701772020484 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239540044308 0.128457276422 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149864412974 0.0628817314937 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.3799401198 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.32208582834 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 98.500998004 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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