A recently issued twenty-year study on headaches suffered by the residents of Mentia investigated the possible therapeutic effect of consuming salicylates. Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin, a medicine used to treat headaches. Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates, food-processing companies also add salicylates to foods as preservatives. The twenty-year study found a correlation between the rise in the commercial use of salicylates and a steady decline in the average number of headaches reported by study participants. At the time when the study concluded, food-processing companies had just discovered that salicylates can also be used as flavor additives for foods, and, as a result, many companies plan to do so. Based on these study results, some health experts predict that residents of Mentia will suffer even fewer headaches in the future.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
In the passage, we are informed that margarine replacement with butter has little impact on customer of Happy Pancake House restaurants. By citing that feedbacks from both customers and servants, the author ascribes this phenomenon to the reason that customers either cannot distinguish difference between them or term "butter" is indiscriminately used by customers. Quite convincing though such explanation appears at first glance, we cannot safely draw a conclusion that it is the unique one that accounts for the facts presented in the argument. Therefore, we need more explanations which could rival with the one given in the argument.
To start off, the author attributes little customers' complains to their satisfaction about such change. While this may be true, such situation may result from other reasons as well. First of all, it is possible that most of customers lack available channels to vent their angry about this sudden product change. If this is the case, just 2 percent of negative feedbacks could have nothing to do with customers' real attitudes. Thus, the seemingly less complains could be explained as stemming from no way to send their dissatisfactions back to the company. Second, while such statistics appear optimistic at fist glance, it is of equal probability that the survey had been conducted with limited responders. If we can prove that only a small proportion of end customers had joined such survey, the underlying logic of the author will be weakened, namely: 2 percent of customers' complains well demonstrate their contentment about such replacement.
Furthermore, the servants' report may lend more support to the author's conclusion about less deleterious results caused by this product change. However, few negative message from servants may presumably originate from other factors as well. For example, customers hurried up with their own business, having no time for whining this unreasonable change. And their indifferent attitudes has been misrepresented by servants as a kind of satisfaction. Moreover, servants in Happy Pancake House restaurants may distort or even conceal the fact of customers' frustrations in order to please their senior management team. Without additional investigations, we cannot decide which factor could finally lead to such positive feedback from servants. It is even likely that all of the aforementioned factors have conspired to this phenomenon.
Last but not least, while customers from Happy Pancake House restaurants are contented with such replacement, it is reckless to claim that this attitude results from their inability from discriminating those two products, or their understanding about the term 'butter'. Other factors may lead to the aforementioned situation. For example, they are extremely busy with their own business so that the replacement of butter seems inconsequential. Or, they intended to try with different alternatives instead of sticking to a single product. If either of two is true, then the author's explanation may become untenable.
In summary, while the two reasons given by the author seem compelling to some degree, in the absence of sufficient information, we cannot establish a causal relationship between them and little complain from customers in Happy Pancake House restaurants. Therefore, the root cause of the aforementioned phenomenon is such a case that we should consider more explanations which could account for the facts presented in the argument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: THERAPEUTIC_TREATMENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'treatment'.
Suggestion: treatment
...d that people in Mentia who underwent a therapeutic treatment by consuming salicylates were ironed to...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... persuasiveness of the while argument. First of all, the author assumed that as...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...almost similar chemical representations also. But the physical properties of both th...
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Line 3, column 680, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ear study have shown a good decrease in the the number of people suffering from headche...
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Line 3, column 680, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ear study have shown a good decrease in the the number of people suffering from headche...
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Line 3, column 905, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... as less usage of mobile, good sleep etc,. Therefore there is no proper proof that...
^^
Line 3, column 908, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... less usage of mobile, good sleep etc,. Therefore there is no proper proof that can concl...
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Line 3, column 984, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goos'' or 'goo's'?
Suggestion: goos'; goo's
...hat can conclude that salicylates are a goos replacement to treat headaches instead ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an use salicylates instead of aspirin. Second of all, the author suggested that...
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...se enormous side effects on human body. Now a days there is a lot of crazy developing for ...
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Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...normous side effects on human body. Now a days there is a lot of crazy developing for ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of chemicals does not hold the water. Finally, the author concludes that salic...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...assumption is considered to be false. In conclusion, it is possible that peopl...
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Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ive assumptions of the author. However, a it stand now, the argument relies on th...
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Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'it'?
Suggestion: a; it
...ive assumptions of the author. However, a it stand now, the argument relies on three...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stands'?
Suggestion: stands
...ssumptions of the author. However, a it stand now, the argument relies on three unfou...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.6327345309 158% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 13.6137724551 169% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 55.5748502994 137% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3213.0 2260.96107784 142% => OK
No of words: 635.0 441.139720559 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05984251969 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01988110783 4.56307096286 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83711003988 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 204.123752495 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431496062992 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1037.7 705.55239521 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4907769376 57.8364921388 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.695652174 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6086956522 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30434782609 5.70786347227 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258123823367 0.218282227539 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870391339523 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739815212791 0.0701772020484 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146073510767 0.128457276422 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681458173815 0.0628817314937 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 98.500998004 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: THERAPEUTIC_TREATMENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'treatment'.
Suggestion: treatment
...d that people in Mentia who underwent a therapeutic treatment by consuming salicylates were ironed to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... persuasiveness of the while argument. First of all, the author assumed that as...
^^^
Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...almost similar chemical representations also. But the physical properties of both th...
^^^^
Line 3, column 680, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ear study have shown a good decrease in the the number of people suffering from headche...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 680, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ear study have shown a good decrease in the the number of people suffering from headche...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 905, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... as less usage of mobile, good sleep etc,. Therefore there is no proper proof that...
^^
Line 3, column 908, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... less usage of mobile, good sleep etc,. Therefore there is no proper proof that can concl...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 984, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goos'' or 'goo's'?
Suggestion: goos'; goo's
...hat can conclude that salicylates are a goos replacement to treat headaches instead ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an use salicylates instead of aspirin. Second of all, the author suggested that...
^^^
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...se enormous side effects on human body. Now a days there is a lot of crazy developing for ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...normous side effects on human body. Now a days there is a lot of crazy developing for ...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of chemicals does not hold the water. Finally, the author concludes that salic...
^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...assumption is considered to be false. In conclusion, it is possible that peopl...
^^^
Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ive assumptions of the author. However, a it stand now, the argument relies on th...
^
Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'it'?
Suggestion: a; it
...ive assumptions of the author. However, a it stand now, the argument relies on three...
^^^^
Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stands'?
Suggestion: stands
...ssumptions of the author. However, a it stand now, the argument relies on three unfou...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.6327345309 158% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 13.6137724551 169% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 55.5748502994 137% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3213.0 2260.96107784 142% => OK
No of words: 635.0 441.139720559 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05984251969 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01988110783 4.56307096286 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83711003988 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 204.123752495 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431496062992 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1037.7 705.55239521 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4907769376 57.8364921388 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.695652174 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6086956522 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30434782609 5.70786347227 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258123823367 0.218282227539 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870391339523 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739815212791 0.0701772020484 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146073510767 0.128457276422 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681458173815 0.0628817314937 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 98.500998004 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.