A recently issued twenty-year study on headaches suffered by the residents of Mentia investigated the possible therapeutic effect of consuming salicylates. Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin, a medicine used to treat headaches. Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates, food-processing companies also add salicylates to foods as preservatives. The twenty-year study found a correlation between the rise in the commercial use of salicylates and a steady decline in the average number of headaches reported by study participants. At the time when the study concluded, food-processing companies had just discovered that salicylates can also be used as flavour additives for foods, and, as a result, many companies plan to do so. Based on these study results, some health experts predict that residents of Mentia will suffer even fewer headaches in the future.
According to the article, some health experts have prophetically asserted that the residents of Mentia will suffer even fewer headaches in the future. The study conducted over twenty years has extrapolated that the rise in the use of salicylates in commercial products has fomated to steadily plunge headache patients in Mentia. For this result to be corroborated true, three questions have to be evaluated meticulously and a reasonable answer must be given to those questions.
Do Salicylates not have any other side effects for consumers? Salicylate is a member of the same chemical family as aspirin so salicylate may have other side effects even though it has been amicable to cure headache. It may stir up other fatal diseases than headaches. If it does not have any side effects but cures headaches, then only the conclusion drawn can be proven true.
Are Study Participants enough in number and included all headache patients? Though the study has been conducted over twenty years, the majority of Participants be not necessarily headache patients. It should be conducted with persons with severe headaches and the number should be enormous to draw an efficacious result from it. If the number of people was limited, the conclusion drawn can be dispensed.
Are consuming salicylates in tremendous amounts likely to reduce headaches to much extent? Commercial products are using salicylates as an additive or flavor which may persuade consumers to consume in abundant amounts. If consuming more salicylates is not likely to reduce headache patients by much extent, then why are they formulating plans to add even more salicylates in their product?
The article given as it stands now is utterly flawed due to the unsuitable assumptions that rarely bolster the conclusion. For the Conclusion to be approbated, a logical answer to the three questions has to be given by the author.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: enough
...be proven true. Are Study Participants enough in number and included all headache patients? Tho...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...dous amounts likely to reduce headaches to much extent? Commercial products are us...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 16.3942115768 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 2260.96107784 70% => OK
No of words: 305.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20327868852 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88758474504 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1363618977 57.8364921388 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8125 5.70786347227 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287501142691 0.218282227539 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961685099102 0.0743258471296 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866799860898 0.0701772020484 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138157905832 0.128457276422 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795026603589 0.0628817314937 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.3550499002 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: enough
...be proven true. Are Study Participants enough in number and included all headache patients? Tho...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...dous amounts likely to reduce headaches to much extent? Commercial products are us...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 16.3942115768 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 2260.96107784 70% => OK
No of words: 305.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20327868852 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88758474504 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1363618977 57.8364921388 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8125 5.70786347227 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287501142691 0.218282227539 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961685099102 0.0743258471296 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866799860898 0.0701772020484 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138157905832 0.128457276422 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795026603589 0.0628817314937 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.3550499002 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.