Two years ago radio station WCQP in Rockville decided to increase the number of call in advice programs that it broadcast since that time its share of the radio audience in the Rockville listening area has increased significantly Given WCQP s recent succe
The author presents the argument of before two years in which the station manager of KICK radio station recommends to increase the call-in advice program in order to gain the more audience given that the WCQP gained more listener in Rockville by increasing number of audience and national survey indicates that audience's number has increased. Although, WCQP's audio number increased after increasing the number of call-in advance program, KICK's manager is too quick to assume that WCQP's increase in number of listeners is only just by increasing the number of call-in advance program; he failed to analyze specific details and answer the various questions so the in getting predicted result is doubtful.
The station manager of KICK assumes that there are no other factors regarding the increase in audience in Rockville after increasing the number of call-in advice program by MCQP. The assumption is too general because he fails to analyze other details behind the increase in call-in advice program so the as per his recommendation the is unlikely to get predicted result. Some questions needs to be asked before recommendation; was there new host in the program? was there different audio quality system which is most liked by audience? For instance, MCQP may be recruited new host who has next quality in conducting the program. Similarly, MCQP may have installed another sound recording system whose voice quality was superior than before. If such questions is not asked the recommendation may not be successful to yield the predicted results.
In addition, Station manager should search the answer of the question: does Medway has the same audience as in Rockville in terms of interest, choice and nature. Before the recommendation answer of this question should be analyzed because if the nature, interest of two place is different then the recommendation may fail to give predicted results. For instance the interest of people of Medway may is different; they might not interested in the call-in advice program. So if the answers of these questions get correctly then the recommendation can engender the predicted result else it can not.
Similarly, another important question is: does Medway has significant number of people? the station manager assumes that the increased in number in the Rockville is significant but before that she should search the number of people who might listen the program. If he gets the valid answer of this question his recommendation can produce the hypothesized result else, it is dubitable in getting the expected result.
Before recommendation the station manager should seek the answer of the questions mentioned above to get the predicted result. If KICK increased the number of call-in advice program without answering the mentioned questions it is dubitable to get the result.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 452 350
No. of Characters: 2339 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.611 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.175 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.718 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 205 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 144 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 90 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.296 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.812 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.39 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.604 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.192 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'need'.
Suggestion: need
...to get predicted result. Some questions needs to be asked before recommendation; was ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Was
...ion; was there new host in the program? was there different audio quality system wh...
^^^
Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...system whose voice quality was superior than before. If such questions is not asked ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 742, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...voice quality was superior than before. If such questions is not asked the recomme...
^^
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...the answer of the question: does Medway has the same audience as in Rockville in te...
^^^
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...the answer of the question: does Medway has the same audience as in Rockville in te...
^^^
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...ure, interest of two place is different then the recommendation may fail to give pre...
^^^^
Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...terested in the call-in advice program. So if the answers of these questions get corr...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...ther important question is: does Medway has significant number of people? the stati...
^^^
Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...ther important question is: does Medway has significant number of people? the stati...
^^^
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...edway has significant number of people? the station manager assumes that the increa...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ble in getting the expected result. Before recommendation the station manager shou...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oned above to get the predicted result. If KICK increased the number of call-in ad...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, then, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 55.5748502994 128% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 16.3942115768 183% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2383.0 2260.96107784 105% => OK
No of words: 452.0 441.139720559 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27212389381 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77220334799 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404867256637 0.468620217663 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 705.55239521 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2629988264 57.8364921388 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.388888889 119.503703932 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 23.324526521 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 5.70786347227 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282488559988 0.218282227539 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970617244295 0.0743258471296 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115287898235 0.0701772020484 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175679992149 0.128457276422 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114405441118 0.0628817314937 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.3799401198 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.5979740519 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 12.3882235529 210% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 11.9071856287 218% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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