We need to increase the funding of the movie title product. As you know, we are working with a first-time director, whose only previous experience has been shooting commercials for a shampoo company. Since the advertising business. We need to increase the funding for the movie Work r director will expect to be able to shoot take after take, without concern for how much time is being spent on any one scene. In addition, while we have saved money by hiring relatively inexperienced assistant producers and directors, this savings in salary will undoubtedly translate to greater expenditures in paying the actors and unionized crew overtime for the extra hours they will spend on the set waiting for the assistant directors and producers to arrange things. If we don’t get this extra money, the movie is virtually assured to be a failure.”
The producer in the above memo claims that the studio needs to increase the funding for the movie by 10% to ensure a quality movie. To support the claim he added, more money can hire unionized crew and paying the actors to perform overtime for extra hours. Also spending less by hiring inexperienced producer and director would save more money. So he concludes that if they don't get extra money, the movie could be failure. The argument rests on many assumptions which make it unreasonable to support the claim.
Firstly, the producer claims that they saved money by hiring inexperienced assistant producer and directors. In this claim he assumes that the work performed by them will not cause any failure to the movie, he assumes that inexperienced assistant producers and director can lead the movie to similar success if they would have hired the experienced assistant producers and directors. But it could be possible that because of the less of expeirence they cannot take the movie to the peak. The author also says that they are working with the director whose previous experience has been shooting for commercials of shampoo company. It is unreasonable to assume that he is qualified enough to direct a movie with so many more responsibility than commercials and ensure a quality product for the studio. From the above assumptions we can say that saving money on hiring inexperienced producers and directors could be the reason for the failure of the movie which completely undermines the conclusion of the author in above argument.
Also the author claims that, working for overtime by paying high to actors and the crew will not lead to the failure of movie. He assumes that there are no other factors that could attribute to the failure of movie. what if due to poor editing, the movie couldnt made it to the market? the author does not provide sufficient information about the other factors which could lead to the failure of the movie.
In order to evaluate the argument, lot of evidence are required to answer these assumptions. The argument as it stands now is currently lacking an adequate explanation, suffers from lack of quantification, and requires further evaluation to answer these assumptions. Thus, it is not considerable to conclude that spending extra money on crew, actors and working for overtime would lead to the success of the movie.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...rs to perform overtime for extra hours. Also spending less by hiring inexperienced p...
^^^^
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ore money. So he concludes that if they dont get extra money, the movie could be fai...
^^^^
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had hired'?
Suggestion: had hired
...ad the movie to similar success if they would have hired the experienced assistant producers and...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ion of the author in above argument. Also the author claims that, working for ove...
^^^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...ould attribute to the failure of movie. what if due to poor editing, the movie could...
^^^^
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... what if due to poor editing, the movie couldnt made it to the market? the author does ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...he movie couldnt made it to the market? the author does not provide sufficient info...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 397.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9798488665 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69853605397 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44080604534 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0657229487 57.8364921388 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.70786347227 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150503683598 0.218282227539 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050225577515 0.0743258471296 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07290020694 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777345019368 0.128457276422 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573329177289 0.0628817314937 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...rs to perform overtime for extra hours. Also spending less by hiring inexperienced p...
^^^^
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ore money. So he concludes that if they dont get extra money, the movie could be fai...
^^^^
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had hired'?
Suggestion: had hired
...ad the movie to similar success if they would have hired the experienced assistant producers and...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ion of the author in above argument. Also the author claims that, working for ove...
^^^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...ould attribute to the failure of movie. what if due to poor editing, the movie could...
^^^^
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... what if due to poor editing, the movie couldnt made it to the market? the author does ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...he movie couldnt made it to the market? the author does not provide sufficient info...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 397.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9798488665 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69853605397 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44080604534 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0657229487 57.8364921388 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.70786347227 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150503683598 0.218282227539 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050225577515 0.0743258471296 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07290020694 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777345019368 0.128457276422 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573329177289 0.0628817314937 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.