Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument. The following appeared in a memorandum from the new president of the Patriot car manufacturing company. "In the past, the body styles of Patriot cars have been old-fashioned, and our cars have not sold as well as have our competitors' cars. But now, since many regions in this country report rapid increases in the numbers of newly licensed drivers, we should be able to increase our share of the market by selling cars to this growing population. Thus, we should discontinue our oldest models and concentrate instead on manufacturing sporty cars. We can also improve the success of our marketing campaigns by switching our advertising to the Youth Advertising agency, which has successfully promoted the country's leading soft drink."
The argument above is well-presented and appears to be relatively sound at first glance:
because according to the President of the Patriot car manufacturing company, the company has not been having a good sale owing to the old-fashioned body styles of Patriot Cars.
Even though this was the past, the current trends of rapidly increasing newly licensed drivers the future in this market of car manufacturing looks flourishing. Till now the competitors certainly had an edge over Patriot Cars as they kept up well with changing demands and wants of the market. Patriot Cars has failed to do so and thus the less sales compared to the competitors.
Since the have realized this its surely a good start to start anew and know that change is required and work towards it. The president predicts that by doing so they will be able to increase their share of the market by selling cars to this growing population, looking at the market trend. This will definitely prove to be right move. But the statement "we should discontinue our oldest models and concentrate instead on manufacturing sporty cars" may not be be the right way to do so. Patriot cars needs to analyze which type and design sell the most and create the own unique selling point after incorporating and looking into all the factors after a detailed research and not just go with the common trend of sport cars. With discontinuing the old cars entirely, the manufacturing machines and storage area may also require to be revamped thus adding expenses to the company.
Advertising through marketing campaigns by switching the advertising to the Youth Advertising agency, which has successfully promoted the country's leading soft drink seems to be a great tactic. Having a well established advertising and marketing company, which has proved itself in the past, market the Patriot cars will help them strengthen their market share.
Thus I feel overall the memorandum from the new president of the Patriot car manufacturing company is well stated and well established from the point of view of the company's future.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...petitors. Since the have realized this its surely a good start to start anew and k...
^^^
Line 4, column 466, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...manufacturing sporty cars' may not be be the right way to do so. Patriot cars ne...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...lp them strengthen their market share. Thus I feel overall the memorandum from the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, may, so, then, thus, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 2260.96107784 77% => OK
No of words: 346.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03757225434 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7804925274 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 204.123752495 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.468620217663 120% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6748804012 57.8364921388 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.076923077 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 23.324526521 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.70786347227 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13605130064 0.218282227539 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491998951334 0.0743258471296 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438236588104 0.0701772020484 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835166701295 0.128457276422 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301233219668 0.0628817314937 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.3799401198 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...petitors. Since the have realized this its surely a good start to start anew and k...
^^^
Line 4, column 466, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...manufacturing sporty cars' may not be be the right way to do so. Patriot cars ne...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...lp them strengthen their market share. Thus I feel overall the memorandum from the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, may, so, then, thus, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 2260.96107784 77% => OK
No of words: 346.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03757225434 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7804925274 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 204.123752495 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.468620217663 120% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6748804012 57.8364921388 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.076923077 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 23.324526521 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.70786347227 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13605130064 0.218282227539 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491998951334 0.0743258471296 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438236588104 0.0701772020484 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835166701295 0.128457276422 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301233219668 0.0628817314937 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.3799401198 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.