The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
As rightly said by the then prime minister of India, Jawaharlal Nehru, that "The youth is the future of a nation". It has been evident over the years that a person's childhood shapes or is responsible for the kind of person they will become as an adult in the future. Prior to entering a society its necessary to prepare the young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields. If so, what can be the best way to do this if not by instilling in them a sense of cooperation.
Cooperation, I feel, allows a person to unbiased. It allows them to listen to other people take their opinions in consideration too before taking an important decision. It makes a person humble. These are the qualities required for a good leader. A good leader who is not capable of taking good decisions but taking good decisions after incorporating its peoples opinions. Being cooperative does not mean a people pleaser personality, it means a person who deal with situations wisely. To run a country or a company better than such a person. A cooperative leader of a nation or a company can make good relations with the other nations and companies which is an essential aspect.
Competitiveness is not necessarily a bad thing. Being competitive is definately good, it means you are ambitious and you strive for success. But it only gains a negetive aspect when this competitiveness makes a person go on a wrong path. If it leads to taking wrong steps like corruption just to atttain a position would be detrimental for the nation and for an industry. A healthy amount of competitivness enables the person to achieve the best they can for themselves and for their people.
There are many industrialists which can be named to have both these qualities and the success they have achieved is known to all. An example would be the founder of Infosys, Narayan Murthy and Sudha Murthy. It is evident how down to earth and such good listeners they are but also have the competitive edge required to sustain in the comepetitive IT industry.
Thus, according to me both qualities cooperation and competitiveness are important to make a good leader. And instilling these qualities in its youth from a younger age prepares them well for future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... has been evident over the years that a persons childhood shapes or is responsible for ...
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Line 2, column 602, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r of a nation or a company can make good relations with the other nations and com...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'qualities'' or 'quality's'?
Suggestion: qualities'; quality's
... industry. Thus, according to me both qualities cooperation and competitiveness are imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, thus, well, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94812174527 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3112781365 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.3181818182 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68181818182 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248921194391 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690382057451 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681601280348 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140213267953 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662511321807 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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