All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools
School is the first place where a toddler start's to learn, read and write. It acts as an first step in the activities of life playing sports, becoming dancer or scientist. It is the place where a child learn about sports, how to write and how one should engage in activity to learn basic to survive in world. It teaches us how to behave in public, how to respect elders, and many more things. Obviously, these activities performed by a toddler need to be graded somehow so that, parents can understand their child's engagement in studies and interpret upcoming career. It is also true that schools just teaches us basics for various other professional career but eventually it forms a foundation in such a way that we can pursue any career path in college.
First is the example of Thomas Edison, the great inventor of late 19th and early 20th centaury. When Edison was in early age, his school teacher wrote letter to his parents to state that he is not capable of studies and cant understand anything taught in school. After, which his mother started teaching him and eventually became the one of the best scientist in world. His invention of light bulb is still in use today and even some principle's stated by him is used in many fields today.
Second is the example of Gaurav Agrawal, the CEO of OYO (On Your Own) Rooms. He was below average student in his early age and he used always get red remark in his answer sheet regarding grades and hard work he need to do in order to improve. But, he never concentrated on getting good marks, he was always enthusiastic about solving problems faced by citizen's in their daily life which led to founding OYO Rooms. Today, his startup is present in more than 30+ countries and is recognized for best service in hotel industry.
Third is the example of my friend Amrat, who was way more smartest in his early life but as the time past he deviated from his studies and moved on to become more to pursue business than focusing on studies. He tried hard in his ventures but he was not successful. And lastly, took a decent job of labour to survive.
I do agree with topic that all parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools and this is not limited for school period only. Parent's should always keep look on childre in each and every stage of their life and should prevent them deviating from main path. At the end, it totally depends on children's motivation, discipline taught, and environment in which they grew.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ts to learn, read and write. It acts as an first step in the activities of life pl...
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Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ity to learn basic to survive in world. It teaches us how to behave in public, how...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e that he is not capable of studies and cant understand anything taught in school. A...
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Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'smartest' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: smartest
...example of my friend Amrat, who was way more smartest in his early life but as the time past ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, look, regarding, second, so, still, third, thus, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 445.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58651685393 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36603282935 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555056179775 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0237435937 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.05 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226381960343 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627342191512 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137423898931 0.0758088955206 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139528335922 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188854058328 0.0667264976115 283% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.