All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statements might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
When a company is in danger or failing, extreme measures are taken into consideration in order to salvage the company. However, the decisions differ depending on the company's perception of the problem, factors like feelings, and reputation are pivotal when it comes to making a decision, thus changing the fate of the company's future. Most execs feel like they can steer future the future of the company, with the inside information, and some outsource to consultants. The questions begins: What is the best way to approach the situation? In landmarking decisions such as what to do with the fate of the company, the company should consult within the company, for convey their internal problems, and how to solve them. Then rely on the opinions of an outside consultant to see the problem in a different perspective. This way the company has different angles and solutions for their problem.
In early 2000's Enron, claimed bankruptcy, this multi-million dollar company, in charge of power and electricity, went bankrupt. No one ever expected this turn out, from this prestigious power company, but indeed it did happen. The questions remains, if they could have had a different turn out, if they were just honest, or perhaps consulted outside sources. This is an example, of a company that kept all of their information concealed, rather than having an outside consultant, they chose to keep all of their information within, and they decided to make the decision to hide they lack of influx, but faking power outages, and blaming in on the hot weather, in order to save money. At this, point the company already was having problems, and rather than resurfacing to their apogee status, they took a turnover and began to deteriorate quietly, until they could not longer hide their scandal. Many argue that is they perhaps outsourced help, they could have tainted their reputation, but at least the company would have been saved.
Nowadays, we have the future of online shopping, and it is taking over many retail stores. It almost seems like the retail stores are fighting for their place in the future, but companies like Amazon, Ebay, etc, are facilitating the need of leaving the house to get basic item. For example, rather than the stores going bankrupt by closing all of their retail store, some are opening up to the idea of online shopping. For instance, Macy's has closed down many store, however they have kept up pivotal store in major cities within the state. In addition to that, they also have joined the world of online shopping, and provide a plethora of options with additional discounts on line to appease to the customer. This is an example of store that rather than closing their doors and solving the problem within themselves, they partnered up to the idea of online shopping. A little loss in the retail market resulted in a lot of gain in the online world.
Managing a company is a very stressful, aggressive, and dynamic responsibility. Especially when there is constant competition, and the customers and invaluable. With that being said, decision making of a company is pivotal, and people need to solve the problem within the company, and outsource for outside opinion. Making a big decision needs to be analyzed and consulted, rather than the fear of losing reputation, and as a result losing the company.
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...are taken into consideration in order to salvage the company. However, the decisi...
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...ngles and solutions for their problem. In early 2000s Enron, claimed bankruptcy...
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...hey could have tainted their reputation, but at least the company would have been...
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...st the company would have been saved. Nowadays, we have the future of online s...
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...ng. For instance, Macys has closed down many store, however they have kept up pivotal stor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2781.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 560.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96607142857 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62450128887 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489285714286 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 871.2 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 18.0 1.77640449438 1013% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.494822157 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.875 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18178807785 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577971662613 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532448821681 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119552724719 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508094781732 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.