Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
A leader is a person who directs people to the path. A leader plays an important role in the field he is working. People around and following him always have some or the other opnion. Some people also change opinions by getting influenced by other people. The author says that a leader who is quickly influenced by people achieves little. I mostly agree with the author.
Firstly the leader is known to be at the fore front and lead people by his morals, ethics, and ideologies. A leader should not get influenced by people around him. If he gets influenced by the popular opinions and shifts then the main ideologies on which he works on may be contradicted. For example , Mahatama Gandhi had to fight for years for practicing non violence as his ideology and help India gain independence. There were may opinions floating around him to leave non violence and practice violence and fight for independence. If he as a leader would get influenced by such shifts in opinions then the Indian freedom struggle by practicing non violence would not have been such a successful and revolutionary movement.
Secondly the leader should be aware about the popular opinions but should not get influenced by them. If the leader gets influenced by the opinions around him it is fairly possible that the people following him might just leave the leader as the opinion might not suit theirs. The opinions stiring in the public may or may not be the right and correct so blindly getting influenced by them will hurt the leader's reputation.
People who disagree with the author might argue that public opinions always change so the leader to be relevant must be influenced by the opinions.
They also argue that the leader is built by his followers, so getting influenced by the shift in opinions is fairly correct.
To conclude the leader should not get blindly influenced by the popular opinions, he should wisely choose the opinions to be influenced from.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding opinions'?
Suggestion: the surrounding opinions
... them. If the leader gets influenced by the opinions around him it is fairly possible that the people f...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...etting influenced by them will hurt the leaders reputation. People who disagree with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86186186186 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58598241113 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429429429429 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.442348628 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9444444444 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300968364213 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115067368263 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727218367724 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185376959772 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326831464061 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.8971910112 38% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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