Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
A leader is a person with the responsibility of leading people, organization, or nation toward a common goal or objective. The responsibility of decision-making is the foremost responsibility of a leader and whether the decision based on popular opinion or on leader’s own expertise and experience is an effective one is a perpetual dilemma. Creating a balance between popular opinion, one’s own wit and what is necessary for the betterment of the people, a leader need to decide objectively and wittily. There are ample examples on both side of the debate; leaders going with people’s will have both perished and periled and is the same for leader not considering popular opinion, yet a common ground can be found in all cases and that is the result is based whether the popular opinion is based on the emotional instinct of people or considerate scrutiny.
The autocratic and totalitarian powers of the world like Rana Regime of Nepal, Adolf Hitler, Saddam Hussain met unfortunate ends due to their negligence of popular opinion and imposing their own will on the mass. The Rana Regime of Nepal denied basic rights of people such as education, right to vote, health facilities, freedom of speech, etc. and the King of Nepal was merely a puppet in their hand, ultimately leading to decry of citizens throughout the nation for their abolishment after over 100years of totalitarian. Adolf Hitler, who is still regarded as the synonym for strong stubbornness and cruelty, was another leader operating on his own will without any consideration of the popular opinion and his end became a celebration to many people of the world. Similarly, the failure of former King Gyanendra of Nepal to recognize the popular opinion and decision to take direct control of the nation led to the collapse of 250-year long monarchy of the nation, where King was regarded as a shadow of one of the most venerated gods of Hinduism, Lord Vishnu.
However, when we scrutinize the leaders like Mahatma Gandhi, Martin Luther King Jr, Nelson Mandela, all of whom are regarded effective leaders throughout the world, it can be observed that they were not always courting the popular opinion. These leaders are not only the exemplar of leaders but also of humanity and human kind, always dedicated on uplifting the moral of people and motivating them towards civility. It is not unknown that people were suggesting armed conflict against British’s East India Company in India, however Gandhi never approved the violence and struggle and was stubborn about peaceful rebellion. Mandela, though in later years while struggling for democracy has to embrace non-violence for a certain period, has always allowed his expertise and experience to take the lead over the popular opinion. King, though already stubborn in not assuming any political position as suggested by many rather serving as a human being promoting equality, was inspired by Gandhi’s successful non-violence movement and though many of his supporters suggested alternative means for freedom, he never left his stand on non-violence.
To sum up, it is not whether the decision is based on popular opinion or the leader himself that makes a leader accomplished rather the objective of the decision and the impact it can create on the people which decides the effectiveness of the decision and hence the leader. So, to be an accomplished leader, an individual should analyze all the aspects, do a thorough research and take decision, borrowing the words from a famous Nepali phrase, “a true leader hears all, but acts on own.”
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, similarly, so, still, while, as to, such as, in all cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2991.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 585.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11282051282 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9180050066 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82184687435 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 962.1 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2264011494 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.9375 118.986275619 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5625 23.4991977007 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236879588113 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818673035857 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606718745774 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151574936452 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391427276548 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 14.1392134831 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 100.480337079 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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