Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
The statement claim that any leader who is easily influenced by popular opinions and shift his decision will accomplish little. I agree with this statement insofar as influenced and shift the decision never make any decision stable and transient decision will less likely make anyone's success. And diverse opinions are available in our society. Change decision based on the popular opinion will never explicit the leader opinion and the results may be counterproductive. However, there are some benefit to change the decision based on popular opinion. It shows and emphasize the democratic value in the society. And sometimes the popular decision more likely help to save a society from danger decision.
One compelling argument in favor of my position is in our society, there are diverse opinion and the people in society are more likely to provide the critical decision on any deep, social and holistic matters. Their opinions are the result of general and shallow thinking. But a leader has more experience and he has the extra abilities than the general people, for that he is the leader, have more justified decision taking ability than general people. So shift the decision based on the popular opinion provided by the general people will may harmful for the society and accomplish little. This will not be sustainable. For example, if any leader took the decision to build a science and tech hub in any area and the most of the people in this area are not interested for this decision because of lack of proper knowledge. If the leader shift his decision only for the people's opinion, will suffer in long term both the society and the people.
Second argument is stable decision is needed to gain success for any project. In society, there are different types of people. Based on their diverse opinion, if any decision is changed or influenced then there are more possibility not to tenable this project. A leader has more critical thinking abilities than the people and he is more expert. So it look so amateur to influence or change the decision based on popular opinion. And lack of sustainabilities, the project may fail. For instance, to build a building for the school, if there are diverse opinion to change the design, then there are less likely the design will be tenable and attractive because most of the people have not minimum experience and knowledge about the building structure.
Moreover, to make any decision, leader has to calculate very deeply and have to think from different perspective. If this final decision is changed based on popular decision then it will accomplish very little.
However, in our society there are democratic value and everyone has the rights to share his opinion and also can challenge the leader decision. Any correct decision is changed based on general people in society then the democratic value will rise and the people will feel the part of this project will emphasize their morality and responsibilities for the society.
Sometimes leader decisions are wrong and the people have the right to correct this and force to change the decision based on empirical values. This will make more sanguine in any government project and decrease the corruption.
In conclusion, if any decision taken by the leader is easily and quickly influenced by the shift in popular opinion, this decision will less likely get successful. But if the decision is influenced by the shift in popular opinion that are based on empirical values then the decision will get successful and more likely keep the society from harm. So leader need to justify the shift the popular opinion carefully and then have to take decision will accomplish more.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'claims'.
Suggestion: claims
The statement claim that any leader who is easily influence...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 871, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... leader shift his decision only for the peoples opinion, will suffer in long term both ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'looks'?
Suggestion: looks
...the people and he is more expert. So it look so amateur to influence or change the d...
^^^^
Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve to think from different perspective. If this final decision is changed based on...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 14.8657303371 229% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3069.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 613.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00652528548 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97582523872 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57921659244 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.332789559543 0.4932671777 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1013.4 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3069706832 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349748550117 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126629544697 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125232483239 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216580946151 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114084995603 0.0667264976115 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'claims'.
Suggestion: claims
The statement claim that any leader who is easily influence...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 871, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... leader shift his decision only for the peoples opinion, will suffer in long term both ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'looks'?
Suggestion: looks
...the people and he is more expert. So it look so amateur to influence or change the d...
^^^^
Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve to think from different perspective. If this final decision is changed based on...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 14.8657303371 229% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3069.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 613.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00652528548 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97582523872 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57921659244 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.332789559543 0.4932671777 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1013.4 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3069706832 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349748550117 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126629544697 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125232483239 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216580946151 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114084995603 0.0667264976115 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.