In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Millions of minds give birth to millions of points of view. It is always advisable to take advice and views from multiple people, such as through surveys, interviews, questionnaires, etc. if a product-based company is about to launch a product. But multiple voices in some scenarios, such as, in the case of one’s career can lead to confusion and discouragement.
Any situation in life can lead to varied destinations and every person on earth may make different choices depending upon one’s circumstances, culture, surroundings, past experiences, and future expectations. Certain topics like choosing your career should be a personal decision and should depend more on your liking and less on what people have to say. Art is not considered to be a good choice in the Asian culture, especially in the Southern part of Asia, like in India, as some people there expect their children to have a high-paying job and that is considered to be a successful life there. Indeed, that is a successful life when you have enough disposable money in your hands, but only if the person doing that job is happy. When a person shows his inclination toward art or any other nonacademic field, people will surely try to oppose your decision and will discourage him at every stage and this will lead to a lack of motivation this will, in turn, leads to a lot of hardship and struggle.
Whereas, when a product is about to be launched, a company is about to publish an IPO, or an entrepreneur is planning to open a new business, all these decisions should and must depend upon the opinions of others as people are going to be their potential customer. It is always advisable to understand what people expect from your product and what are the needs of the current day market. Meeting with the board and employees can be the first step towards gaining insights into the expectations and opinions for the product. Surveys, advertisements, social media, polls, etc. are some of the other ways which can help you to know what alterations should be done, what features may be added, whether and will people accept the product at the set price, and what could be the expected sale. All these figures unknown and all these questions unanswered may add up to a hefty financial loss to your organization. Launching the product into the market and then considering the plausible and expected changes will not be a rational decision as the loss has already occurred. Hence, critics play a huge role in making progress in such cases.
Another field in which opinions are much needed may be politics, if you are governing a democratic nation, then the sentiments and beliefs of the public are mandatory in law making, privatization, reservation schemes, budgets, security, education policies, etc. On the other hand, the decision should be entirely personal when the people concerned are your family members because no one will ever empathize with you and will give opinions as per their culture and circumstances.
In conclusion, it is certain that if we want to make progress and succeed in an endeavor, then we must move forward with both contrasting and favoring minds. But, one should be rational enough to comprehend where the judgments are not required.
- In any situation progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In devel 75
- In any situation progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In devel 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tiple voices in some scenarios, such as, in the case of one’s career can lead to ...
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...lead to confusion and discouragement. Any situation in life can lead to varied...
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...s circumstances, culture, surroundings, past experiences, and future expectations. Certain topic...
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...ads to a lot of hardship and struggle. Whereas, when a product is about to be l...
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...isements, social media, polls, etc. are some of the other ways which can help you to know w...
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...ole in making progress in such cases. Another field in which opinions are much...
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... per their culture and circumstances. In conclusion, it is certain that if we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, then, whereas, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2699.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 547.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93418647166 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80658311525 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504570383912 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 831.6 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5351262805 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.523809524 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0476190476 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135976880375 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391015079828 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032380194529 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758934967269 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302539997872 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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