The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
Leaders are those who govern the affairs of those under them and therefore must try all they could to make the best decision that suits those they govern. Leaders are of various type; President, Governor, Community leaders, etc. A leader should be opened to feedback so that any decision he/she wants to take will be in the best interest of his followerships.
Let's take a look at the president of a particular country that is being appointed to direct the affairs of a country and also make sure that the country is stable in all sectors. He must be able to get up-to date information from what is happening in the country and he can achieve this through governors, ministers, senators and other agents working from him as these people are closer to the people and know what they are facing at a particular time. Through the information he get from this set of people, he will be able to take the right decision and therefore be more effective in his ruling.
In my country, Nigeria, the era of military rule is uncomparable to that of civilian rule in terms of decision making. This is because the Head of State in Military regime is not always opened to feedbacks from the agents that are closer to people and therefore takes any decision in his own interest as no one has the audacity to challenge his decision, either good or bad, but in civilian rule, certain channels has to be followed for any decision the president want to make and all this resulted in being having a terrible military rule during those eras.
Furthermore, let's consider an organization involve in the production of a particular goods. If the managing director being appointed to manage the affairs of the company is kind of dogmatic and not open to advise from the retailers, wholesalers final consumers on the quality of the quality and effectiveness of the products then he is bound to run down the company as he will not be able to take correct decision on how to go about the compaint form people since he is not opened to feedback .
Though, there are times that a leader needs to take harsh decision against the feedback of people due to certain reasons. Take for instance world war two and the detonatio of the atomic bomb in Japan by the United State of America, those at the aim of affairs didn't even table their final decison to peopple and the world at large to hear thieir feedback as they knew that people the world will be against it but the went ahead to carry out the action and this is one of the major reason why Japan surrendered, leading to the end of the world war. Though, it caused havoc to the two cities involved but atbte end, the action was somehow justified.
In conclusion, there is need for a leader to be opened to feedback from people so as to know the current situation of things as he can't be using his digression to govern the followership. Through this feedback, he can be able to make the best decision in the interest of his people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 58.6224719101 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2430.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 533.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55909943715 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49020863095 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439024390244 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 779.4 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.922450711 60.3974514979 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.0 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5333333333 23.4991977007 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232086501438 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837806022665 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751644158533 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133319920547 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780975200193 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 48.8420337079 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.