The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author's short saying seems apt in the context of leadership as it talks about one of the essential qualities that are expected to be inherent in a good and effective leader. Beholding the opinion of those whom the leader leads is often an effective way to make sure their support in the long run.
As expressed by the author, an effective leader should always stay in touch with the mood or opinion of the people because it is necessary to know what the people aspire to achieve before going on with any task which is quite relevant for the white collar jobs in the industry. As well for the blue-collar jobs,this characteristic of the leader is quite important to get work from the subordinates.
Encouraging feedback often helps to gauge the direction of development in any socio-economic structure where satisfaction of the people is necessary in order to prevent any uprising or rebellion. A leader should be the one who represents the people. This encouraging of feedback also affects the people in a psycological way so that they often feel their participation in the development of the nation which creates a constructive environment in the nation to flourish.
But at the same time , the author makes an assumption that this aspect of the leader is seen in the best leader alone which can be quite misleading . Although,this is the quality of an effective leader but this alone doesnot deosnot categorize the best leader. In order to become the best leader,other aspects of leadership are also expected to be taken care of.Alas, the aspect of a leader about which the author has expressed his views in a short saying is one of the improtant characteristic of a leader.
As a concluding remark , One can safely and confidently reiterate the author's idea regarding the leadership quality of an effective leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 309.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92556634304 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93227718794 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485436893204 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8375841632 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.363636364 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188572089042 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766592022712 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331128545875 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991448113575 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047713683323 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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