The best leaders in the world encourage feedback from the people they lead.
The best leaders in the world encourage feedback from the people they lead.
The cheif executive officer of Amazon once said the he would prefer to hire people who are smarter than him. It is not only Mr. Bezos, many titans in the business field do not feel intimidated or feel insecure when they ask their employees feedback or advice regarding professional matters .This is a positive trend for any organisation as it encourages more ideas and filters the bad ones like a sustainable system. Encouraging feedback can point out short commings in an organsation and provides a room for improvement.We can safely say that feedback brings out the best in a organisation and its leader.
However, this can sometimes backfire. When many smart people work on an idea, there is always a chance where individuals may disagree upon certain issues.This will lead to many arguments and a slower decision making. There is also a possibility of reaching a stagnant point in the discussion, where the leader is confused and unable to make a solid decision. This can be overcome by having a voting or an opinion poll to make a decision.
Therefore, we can conclude that encouragin feedback has a positive influence in an organsation and outweighs its drawbacks.
- The best leaders in the world encourage feedback from the people they lead. 33
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 58.6224719101 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 2235.4752809 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 210.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98571428571 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87014896861 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647619047619 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7642542511 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3429954225 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166071237023 0.0831039109588 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.2995691473 0.0758088955206 395% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329775440644 0.150359130593 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.391383268944 0.0667264976115 587% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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