"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The above statement brings into question whether the best way for a society to prepare its youth for leadership in government or any other field for that matter is by instilling a sense of cooperation and not competition. Undoubtably, one performs better with healthy competition as the motivation to do better is more with competition than without. But it fails to consider the multifold advantages that come with cooperating with one and other. Thus, I agree with the statement that the best way to prepare youth for leadership positions is by instilling a sense of cooperation and not competition.
The first obvious advantage is that a positive cooperation ensures that positive growth in one sector of the industry implies a positive growth in the other sectors of the same industry. This is true since all the leaders of their particular sector cooperate and make decisions that are for the collective good of all. We can take the example of the technology giant Infosys to further prove our point. Here, the leaders of each sector of the company like - technology, innovation, marketing and management as well as the CEO, all work collectively in cohesion with one and other to ensure the primary goal, that is, growing the company is met. This is shown in their huge success since its inception.
Another point to consider is that, in most success stories of industries, a large group of people are consulted to make major decisions. This proves that more the people involved, the more ideas and healthy discussions take place. This can be only done by instilling a sense of cooperation in the youth.
Instilling a sense of competition could also give way for individuals to get ahead through unfair means and this is detrimental to society as a whole.
While we cannot deny that individuals perform better given healthy competition as they have more motivation, and this could give us better results in the immediate future, the question to be asked here is how one would define "healthy" and how society can maintain that notion. We must also consider if short term benefits are better than long term goals for a society.
Thus, instilling a sense of cooperation and not competition amongst the youth of a society is the best way to prepare them for leadership positions in all fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98195876289 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85722211046 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476804123711 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9146246909 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8125 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284374310659 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102838992746 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116594684141 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167095654697 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115902125513 0.0667264976115 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.