The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons
and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
“If you want to go fast go alone but if you want to go far go together” is a Ghanaian proverb that tries is best to juxtapose the benefits of competition and cooperation, with the former part of the proverb representing competition and the latter speaking to cooperation. Cooperation and competition comes in different forms, but in the light of this essay cooperation means the coming together of people from different backgrounds to achieve a particular goal, with no other ulterior motives. Competition on the other hand means a group individuals or entities working their personal best to achieve a particular goal often for their personal glory.
Cooperation just as competition since time in memorial has helped humanity birthed many profitable ideas, but has also led to many atrocities. Hence, to prepare young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields imbibing in them a sense of cooperation is the best of both worlds. With cooperation, there is often a sense of structure, responsibility and accountability which helps breed other soft skills that directly and indirectly assist in the development or achievement of any goal. However, cooperation has it’s shortcomings such as laziness among some members in huge teams, even it is believed that 80 percent or the work in a company is often done by 20 percent of the workforce. But there might be a plethora of reasons accounting for this misshapen, hence cooperation cannot be the only one to blame. One might say competition is necessary for development since it often keeps people on their toes. Making one work extra hard to come with a solution for an urgent need. For example, players in a particular market or niche often compete with each other for customers making them work hard to ensure they manufacture the best possible product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 540, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'individual'?
Suggestion: individual
...etition on the other hand means a group individuals or entities working their personal best...
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Line 2, column 532, Rule ID: IT_IS[22]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...t of any goal. However, cooperation has it’s shortcomings such as laziness among som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08970099668 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98792838429 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1217684376 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.272727273 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272419569819 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101888540682 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790080831085 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199782120075 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510672821655 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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