The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
Issue presented by Auther is to prepare young people for leadership roles in various fields like governament, industry and many other fields. they should instil sense of cooperation rather that sence of compitition in them. though sense of cooperation is one factor for good leadership, it is not the only factor for good leadership so this point can not be completly agreed.
To become Good leader in any field one must have manny qualities such as vision, persistance, good communation skills, cooperation, compitition and many more. Cooperation is just one of them, One can not become a great leader with just having cooperative qualities and not any sence of compition. for example in Indian textile industry one of biggest leader Mr Dhurubhai Ambani made his place in textile industry by introducing competitive clothing in the Indian market. if he just had cooperative qualities he would not have been so successful which sense of compition gave him.
When it comes to governament great leader must be able to cooperate with world leaders but more than leader must be able to make a deal which is good and beneficial for the country and sense of compition brings that fervor to land such great deal. Mr Atal Biahri Vajpeyi formar Prime Minister of India made India a nuclear technology enabled Nation which would not have been possible with just cooperation because cooperating with international guidlines would have never allowed India to conduct such tests. His sense for compitition made it possible to take such bold step.
One can not be great leader without cooperating with others but sense of compition is equally imp and required for the ledearship qualities.
From all the examples instilling just sense of cooperation without compition is not the best way for society to prepare its young people for leadership in variouse fields.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 304.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10197368421 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71421049761 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506578947368 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9051581264 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280916354405 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125079862658 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127186880132 0.0758088955206 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212679641248 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16135638242 0.0667264976115 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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