"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Asserting that the most propitious approach for development of the younger generation is by inducing mutual cooperation and not by competition, is too audacious. There are both merits and demerits to these methodologies which need to be carefully weighed so as predict the likeliness of success with better efficacy.
Cooperation inculcates a sense of bonding, presenting a more affable and ethically rich atmosphere. That morals guide people to be more generous, which at times creates an environment that instills the sense of forebonding thus compelling the people to be more productive, is totally contradictory to the claim. Dependence can help build mutual trust and lead to an overall growth of the person as a leader, thus weakening the claim. A good leader expects results but a great leader creates an environment to produce them.
Is the world, where mutual cooperation is much needed to cater to the effects of humans on environment, the control of the deleterious waste products they release, the dependence for oil, arms, aircrafts and other essential goods, going to function the way it does if the communities in different countries refuse to comply? Is the United Nation going to hold its proceeding is there is no cooperation? Or will the national and state govements be able to cope up to cater to the demands of the public if there is internal resentment? All of these examples compel us to question the extent to which the claim is true.
That being said, one must not totally negate the importance of competition. Competition is required for growth just as much. A competent individual is important to accomplish the task assigned in a set period of time, making the claim stronger. If there is a check on its extent and ferocity, competition guides people to perform better than their presumed capabilities.
This ability to perform and outweigh other has helped humans evolve. We cannot be negligligant towards the importance of competition in nature. Animals compete for food, shelter and partners. This improves the genetic diversity and helps in selection of more efficient individual thus acting a natural filter for the weaker race. Thus the importance of competion for this occurance in nature can be extrapolated to human life in general.
These arguments compel an individual to be equivocal about the importance of competion versus cooperation. Perhaps the best solution to reach a widely agreeable notion is to have a meticulous trade-off and balance the pros and cons relative to a praticular situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 203, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...o accomplish the task assigned in a set period of time, making the claim stronger. If there is...
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Line 17, column 331, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...g a natural filter for the weaker race. Thus the importance of competion for this oc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20823244552 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96892981741 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56416464891 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.6428524688 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146711373473 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400221418228 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289125850542 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697022893233 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180138558242 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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