"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Nowadays, the main issue in society competition is very high. So, the leadership role prespective in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in the sense of cooperation. So, I agree with position for two reasons and disagree with it another reason.
In the first case, In this field prespective, the leadership role is aggressive. So, the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in various field who people have cooperation to another. Some young people have a lack of cooperation with another so which people not suitable for this position. In industries, the expectation is the young people can cooperate with the employes.
In the second case, Some young people is good for a leadership role in any field but the people do not interact with their team so people not suitable for this position. In any leadership role, people do not properly interact and not cooperate with each other who young people should not achieve good success.
Another reason for disagree prespective, the competition is also a huge role in a leadership role in various fields. The competition to another competitor is required because the people only cooperate with another and no think about competition so who people do not improve his/her position.
In conclusion, society trains its young people to a sense of cooperation with another and also thinks about the competition with each other for a leadership role in various fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , industry
...leadership role prespective in goverment,industry, or other fields is by instilling inthe...
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Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...illing inthem sense of cooperation. So, i agree with position for two reasons and...
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Line 8, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is also huge role in leadership role in various field. The competition to anothe...
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Line 8, column 154, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...e competition to another competitors is require because the people only cooperate to an...
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Line 10, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so think about competition to each other for leadership role in various fields. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2149122807 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91194711152 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 215.323595506 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416666666667 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7229681383 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0833333333 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380728288137 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167586321643 0.0831039109588 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874633360225 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241922891652 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666217708449 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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