In children society should instill them a Sense of cooperation because it is necessary in the field of industry, leadership etc, not competition.
youth is the integral part of our society. they are the most significant pillar of the nation. The growth and demise of the entire nation depends on them , their activities , their sense of working , etc. to make it short they are the hope of one the whole country. it is reponsibility of the society to give their maximum time to the youth of the nation. And make them more sensible, disciplined and realize them the power and the benefits of cooperation and coordination . As cooperation and discipline are important factors which are necessary for every field of professionalism.
As all know the most advantageous factor of the democratic country is that people have voting right through which they choose their own leader which becomes Prime Minister and has ample of powers , he can do whatever he wants but still he has to cooperate with its subordinates as well as countrymen because with their support his party will collapse and he will not be in power anymore in future.
On the other hand , we can take the example of Mr, Mukesh Ambani, he is richest man of the Asia and is the biggest businessman in the history of india. he has telecommunications Business and has his own network popularly known as Jio, he has many refineries, he is the biggest exporter in india. he has everything what one has dreamt of. but still he has to cooperate with his managers , he can not make crucial decisions by itself. he always considers the opinions of other and on the basis of all the discussion he makes decision and always cooperate with their juniors in new projects. And it is one of the biggest reason of his success that he always give chance to his juniors to openly say their opinion and encourage them if they want to try something new.
Similarly in other fields too, like hospitals , universities, banks ,etc where many people work together they should respect each other’s opinion and always cooperate with them in order to flourish their organisation. As the growth of these individual organisations collectively affect the growth of the country.
Although , in industries and basically in private sectors competition is natural . In order to coalesce they have to compete with others so that they can increase the growth of their company and here competition is noxious.
Hence , it is necessary to prepare the youngster for better tomorrow by instilling in them a sense of cooperation and in some condition as discussed above competition is harmless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, similarly, so, still, well, as to, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91885441527 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84208597286 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501193317422 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.4069430458 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.473684211 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147978516922 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047996689751 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623320880079 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923316233606 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762550133295 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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