Claim: In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Change is the law of nature. Whether it be the changing seasons every few months or the changing cosmos. Change is the only constant in this universe. Every enterprise needs leaders to take it forward may it be a bussiness,politcal or social one. Leaders play a key role in steering the boat that is the enterprise. As is obvious from history a leader who leads a nation or enterprise for far too long inturn becomes the nation or enterprise itself. The romans achived great heights under julius ceaser, but fell visciously as soon as he was gone.
Changing leaders every 5 years or in an short interval is a mordern concept, which has been established by the dreadful experiences of the past. Many Kings and dictators have ruled over their land for far too longs. Curbing the growth of new talent and hence leading to stagnation of thier nation. Mordern democracies have proved that changing a nations leader every five years has proved beneficial in the long term. Many may argue that some leaders like the late Franklin Rosevelt who ruled for four terms did a great job in changing and mordernising USA. But leaders like President Rosevelt are the exception and not the norm.
In todays fast changing world, multiple fields and technologies emerge within a short time. A person who wakes up after ten years may see wide ranging changes around him in this century than a person who woke up after 100 years during the middle ages. Leaders need to constantly learn and unlearn things to cope up with changing enviroments. A term policy will not only provide a chance to others but also help an enterpirse tackle the need of the hour, with new revitalized leadership. Bussiness leader often need to predict in advance the upcoming trends in thier fields. A single person will stagnate after a point in his thinking, and this may lead to lack of growth in the bussiness.
Change is also hard but also necessary. Caution should also be taken in the period of change as changing leadership frequently may end up being disastrous for the enterprise. Hence, a right balance should be maintained while attempting change.
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- Claim In any field business politics education government those in power should step down after five years Reason The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership Write a response in which you discuss the extent to wh 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , politcal
...to take it forward may it be a bussiness,politcal or social one. Leaders play a key role ...
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Line 1, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a nation or enterprise for far too long inturn becomes the nation or enterprise ...
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Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... Changing leaders every 5 years or in an short interval is a mordern concept, wh...
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Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...democracies have proved that changing a nations leader every five years has proved bene...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 420, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...has proved beneficial in the long term. Many may argue that some leaders like the late F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80821917808 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59815602148 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564383561644 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8849170645 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.7727272727 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5909090909 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 5.21951772744 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.085595353175 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234298473456 0.0831039109588 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231152768548 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542373609921 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127569804044 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.