Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
In a current society, political issues are pivotal for a nation’s prosperity. Therefore, it is debatable whether having a new leadership and obligating the current people with the power to step down after a certain amount of years is beneficial for success. I agree with the claim that after five years, people who have power should step down. However, I disagree with the reason that the most definite way to success for any corporation is revitalizing through having a new leader.
First, having a new leader in five years is beneficial in the field of business. Take Theranos, for example. Theranos was a company that developed groundbreaking blood test technology. Elizabeth Holmes, who was a leader of that company was only nineteen years old by then which is remarkable that she made such a success at a young age. However, it turned out that she fabricated the test result to be successful, and everything turned out to be a false claim later. If the leader changed after five years, there would be a chance to make a change in the false claim. However, Holmes kept the power for a long time, which led to the collapse of the corporation.
Second, a society can gain more benefits by changing into a new leader after five years. Take Franklin Roosevelt, for example. Roosevelt was a U.S. president during an economic crisis, the Great Depression in the United States. After he became a leader of the nation, he made an effort to rehabilitate from such a crisis. He brought up the New Deal Plan, which helped the government overcome the problematic situation, successfully making the path to a nation’s thrive. If it were not for Roosevelt’s new leadership, there would not have been such a crisis. Therefore, it is crucial to have five years of qualifications in periods of leadership.
However, having a new leader is not always the best way that leads to revitalizing an enterprise. As it is crucial to change the power after a few years to prevent leaders from overusing the power, having new leaders does not ensure a society that will lead to the revitalization of a certain situation. Take Donald Trump, for example. He became the president of the United States after the five-year qualification of the previous president. However, he was not able to resolve the economic issues or societal issues in the U.S.
In summary, it is crucial to change into a new leader after five years to prevent leaders from overusing their power. However, it is not always the best way to recover from a crisis. The way that leads an enterprise prosperity is not just the presence of a new leader, but a person with moral ethics.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lizing through having a new leader. First, having a new leader in five years...
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...to the collapse of the corporation. Second, a society can gain more benefits...
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...ualifications in periods of leadership. However, having a new leader is not al...
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...ic issues or societal issues in the U.S. In summary, it is crucial to change in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...leader, but a person with moral ethics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82599118943 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79090535671 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444933920705 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.882081865 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.64 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.16 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268962076672 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792794002007 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591294497699 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162408827403 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776284991013 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lizing through having a new leader. First, having a new leader in five years...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to the collapse of the corporation. Second, a society can gain more benefits...
^^
Line 5, column 649, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ualifications in periods of leadership. However, having a new leader is not al...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 531, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ic issues or societal issues in the U.S. In summary, it is crucial to change in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...leader, but a person with moral ethics.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82599118943 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79090535671 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444933920705 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.882081865 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.64 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.16 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268962076672 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792794002007 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591294497699 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162408827403 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776284991013 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.