Claim Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted since it may well be proven false in the future Reason Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate

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Claim Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.

Reason Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate.

I agree with this claim as most of the people believe anything they see or read. Treating this type of information as a fact without verifying it can turn out to be fatal.

Now-a-days, many people regardless of age believe what they see on their phone. People don't even bother to verify the information they have read to be true or false. A prime example of this is the elderly people believe anything they read on Whatsapp or on Facebook. One message for a friend and they start believing the information. Elderly people who are from a generation where technology was not advanced and source of information was the newspaper and television. Believe in this type of information. Where newspaper was true and verified source.

Another example is the young generation who are mindlessly following the so called "Fitness Influencer". This Fitness influencer are nothing but marketing people who want sell their product. First they put out a video where they tell you do some task like quit eating salt it causes weight gain and muscle size won't increase. Which can turn out to be fatal for you as salt is one of our staple food item. But these young generation majorly boys who have joined the gym recently follow this guys mindlessly. Consuming various tablets without checking their side effects or asking the most important question 'Do I really need these?'.

While there are also people who put good and verified content on social media. Whose facts are verified and true to their core. Like their are various podcasts were they literally read out a news from the official sources. But not everyone knows these people as their is a saying in the social media 'More the drama more viewership you get'. So the main task for common people is to verify whether the information you read or see from the person you follow is verified and true to the core.

So my conclusion, verifying any information you read on your phone must be verified before you believe it. This would save a major fatal incident in the future.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82857142857 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54549461935 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508571428571 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.647237269 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8181818182 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77272727273 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14856272807 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489667133573 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648903893319 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108942993416 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055854410708 0.0667264976115 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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