Claim The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models Reason Heroes and role models reveal a society s highest ideals

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Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society’s highest ideals.

I believe that we should understand the character of a society by examining the heroes of society, but also its industry.
Heroes are absolute as indicators that reflect a particular value that society pursues. For example, American Captain is the hero of American society, there are key traits including strong physically and mentally, saving poor people from suffering and help timely who really need help. It could tell the value that American society would like to lionize like as pioneers from United Kingdom to this nation, exploring and establishing a well-flourished and potent nation. Moreover, another example is that the hero of North Korea is the father of Kim Jong Un, there are a lot of his statues standing in public space. Undoubtedly, the character is a dictator and reflects that a centralized-power nation that controls and manipulate the mind of people.
However, sometimes, the real heroes are not canonized or noticeable by society are still worth to respect and they’re also the core value of a society. For instance, Taiwan has a benefactor called Chen Shu-chu, and she has been elected to be one of the most influential people in the world by TIME magazine. Chen has been devoted her whole to society without asking returning. She has donated almost her poverty to help poor people and students in the rural area of Taiwan, but she still keeps humble. By studying her history couldn’t understand Taiwan society because her morality is too high for Taiwanese to follow. In other words, there are very few people could achieve as Chen did.
Indeed, there are still a lot of things that we can’t see from the hero's models. For example, In Taiwan, the hero is Sun Yet-San who is the father of Taiwan had overturned the previous thorn and create a new nation that has flourished well so far. Yet, we never know the technology achievement from Taiwan by studying role models. Today, Taiwan is famous for its technological advancement in semi-conductor, like TSMC(Taiwan Semiconductor manufacturing corporation) is the world-leading company in the world, it has made a lot of contributions to the technology that no one in the field doesn’t know.
In conclusion, the best way to understand the trait of a society is by learning its lionized heroes and its industry.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, really, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00523560209 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87701932688 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7347399799 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.470588235 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243831585596 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867872606582 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102922217651 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194979709328 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124758712954 0.0667264976115 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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