Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and
women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the
reason on which that claim is based.
The term hero and role models, as it has physical emobodiment, also has numinous elements attached to it. As the author claims
that only by scrutinizing or analyzing the top tier people of a society who are revered by it's people, we can evaluate
the whole society. Agreeing to this claim with couple of reasons.
At first, we should go back in time to the dawn of formal academic knowledge at Greece-Mesopotemia. This is time period of B.C.,
when free spirited knowledge had started to evolve into complex insights in all spheres of life, the world and the universe.
The likes of Plato, Socretes, Pythagoras walked on this very earth, and these people were idolatarous/ deferenced by the
general people. From figuring out: how to measure a field ? The trigonometry was invented. They even developed a solar-sytem
model called heliocentric model( though not accurate because Earth was in the middle, as other planets and Sun revolved around Earth), still
a quintessential astronomical model at that time when no high ranged telescopes were yet to be invented. These people were not only at that time ,but the best
intellectuals of all time. Such people were the role models or heros at that time. Therefore, we can convincingly say that those Greek societies can be analyzed
by evaluating this such pundits.
After this quixotic example, we can devolve into a lesser one, Adolf Hitler was a political leader, not a tyrant. He came to the power of his nation through
votes, he did not seize any power from the people. Hence, we can contend that he was favored by most of his people, giving him role model/ hero status.
It is very general knowledge what he did to the whole world, not to mention partical to jew or minority people of his own country. Even the term evil is
a praise to him, as he is the talisman of a sinister,egotist, and a racist human-being ever to walk on Earth. He not only killed a whole lot of people, he single
handedly abolished couple of nations. So, his actions can be partially attributed to the people that led him to power.
Lastly, we can look into depth of a country which is called the happiest country of the whole world named "Bhutan". It is one of three countries which are
carbon-negative meaning they emit less carbon-dioxide that oxygen, whereas every other country is not only carbon postive, but they emit significant amount of carbon-dioxide
that is invasive to the environment. And it has seventy percents of forests to habitats, which contributes massively into keeping the environment green and clean.
Most of the policies are from the line of kings of Bhutan who maintains this strict policy of keeping the environment safe and it's people in happier facilities through not
industrilization but with jobs that are environment friendly. And the people of bhutan respect these policy makers and authoraritative figures.
In conclusion, we can see that role models or heros play a vital role in every society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, look, so, still, therefore, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2500.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 504.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96031746032 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93063687396 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 794.7 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6108373148 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.16 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.97078651685 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135541943789 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407978180767 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642828423593 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418843474933 0.150359130593 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631858791029 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 100.480337079 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.