Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people’s hearts or minds.
Every society in a world, there are laws which has to be followed by every person. Laws are introduced to maintain a peace within societies and moreover, laws or agreements created between societies to maintain a peace in between societies. Laws are made to help humans in society to live a simple, calm life without conflict and chaos. When the laws are made to oppress feelings of some group or communities, persons in a group dissent about it.
Laws are made to protect and to improve lifestyle of human being. But, there are some laws created by majorties which are imposed on minorities in a group.Some laws are created in line of religion and to maintain in a society. For example, laws made against LGBT(Lesbian Gay Bisexual Transgender) marriages. This issue was not solved across a world after imposing heavy punishment. LGBT community protested against law which was forced on them. Laws were unable to change a hearts in
community. Instead, The laws were changed in favor of LGBT marriages and thier rights are given to them. This example shows forcing a rudimentary law in a modern society does not change minds.
On other hand, laws helps to improve lives and thinking in a society. In some parts of india, there were custom such as women used to burn herself after the death of her husband. This custom was banned by the government which thousands of lives of women. There may be some people get offended after banning it and they might have not changed their minds.
Another example, slavery - slaves were deprived of basic rights of life. They were not controller of their lives but their master. After law against slavery, there might be resentment in masters of slaves. Certain laws are required in a society for betterment of societies, laws should be made even if its does not change mind of some minds in a society.
In a conclusion, laws have to be for betterment and maintaining a peace in a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, as for, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79341317365 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52434967441 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491017964072 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4137753728 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.2380952381 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277453604485 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931643257592 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643817618346 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159841416958 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444471620579 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.