Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
The legal system introduces to keep control of the unfavorable action of the public. The laws changes according to the time and peoples of society follow the laws to maintain their standard with society. The claim suggests that most of the problems of society can't be solved using the laws and legal system due to no laws can change people's minds. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the suggestions because of the following reasons.
To begin with, the laws are the rules or standard boundaries within which one should act. After years of evaluation, the human mind can discern good work and detrimental work for mankind. Consequently, Humans learn to live along with other humans to get a mutual benefit. Hence, they make the system or law, which one needs to follow to get the benefits of living along with society. So, people of society works under the laws and regulation for their benefit or the fear of being isolated from society. For instance, in modern society there are many banks, jewelry stores, and other precious product stores, one can easily be robbed with sufficient work. However, very few think of doing such an audacious act because of the fear or boundaries of the law in which we are living. The above example illustrates that the laws are the only force which keeps the peoples in the control in account to maintain the decorum of society. Thus, it's possible with the law to change the people's mind to solve the many problems of the society.
Furthermore, it's not necessary to change one's mind or heart to solve the problem. We can do it just by the force or compel one to follow the defined system. Governments can enforce the law to solve the complex problem and punish them who didn't follow the required law. Consequently, if the one doesn't want to follow it by heart yet he or she obeys the rules due to the fear of punishment. For example, the government wants to control the pollution level in certain cities, which is happening due to the overuse of the vehicle. Consequently, governments introduce the policy which allows odd license number vehicles on odd dates and even license number vehicles on even dates, and the license of the one will be canceled who don't follow the rule. Hence, most of the people will follow the rules in the fear of punishment, which solve the government's problem of pollution. The above example illustrates that the laws or legal processes can alter one's mind or heart by force. Thus, we can say that the current problems of society can be solved with the help of the law either by force or request, but it will be solved.
Of course, some may argue that every problem of society can't be solved with the force of law. However, the law doesn't always mean to be punished sometimes the law can be used to encourage the one who obeys the rules. Consequently, to get the appreciation public will start following the rules. For example, rather punishing those who spread the dirt in society, the government encourages those who clean the dirt in society than other people will start doing the same. Hence, it's the law which can get rid of most of the problem with changing people's thought.
All things considering, we can say that the law is the force which prevents the one from doing pernicious work. People will always follow the rules for their mutual benefits. Law can change people's minds and hearts either by force or by request to solve the existing problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'change'.
Suggestion: change
...unfavourable action of public. The laws changes accroding to the time and peoples of th...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...intain thier standard with the society. The claim suggest that most of the problem ...
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Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...er standard with the society. The claim suggest that most of the problem of scoiety can...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...est that most of the problem of scoiety cant be solved using the laws and legal syst...
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Line 3, column 1026, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind solving'.
Suggestion: mind solving
...ible with the law to change the peoples mind to solve the many problems of the society. F...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...oblems of the society. Furthermore, its not necessay to change the ones mind or...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...the complex problem and punish them who didnt follow the required law. Consequently, ...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... required law. Consequently, if the one doesnt want to follow it by heat yet he or she...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'obeys'.
Suggestion: obeys
...want to follow it by heat yet he or she obey the rules due the fear of punishment. F...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rgue that every problems of the society cant be solved with the force of law. Howeve...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ved with the force of law. However, law doesnt always means to be punished sometimes l...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the one who obey the rules. Conseqently, to get the apperciation public will star...
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Line 7, column 485, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...eople will start doing the same. Hence, its the law which is able to get rid of mos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 94.0 58.6224719101 160% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2907.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 630.0 442.535393258 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61428571429 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00997013923 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34842812078 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398412698413 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 894.6 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6257566962 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.9 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63333333333 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346260350473 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112866268429 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103997008668 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236143487643 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530774722265 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.