Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the claim. Address the most compelling reasons/examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Small businesses are a cornerstone of the American Dream: to own your own shop, be your own boss, in a business you built yourself. The ability to come to the United States with little else but hope and the dream of a better life is what brought so many people to this country. Small businesses can become the backbone of a community, from book club meetings at the local bookstore to food drives and donations at the diner down the block. The role that government plays in the success of these small businesses is beneficial and necessary to keep such vital community components alive.
As gigantic corporations spread across the country, small businesses are put at risk. Local and small businesses often cannot afford to compete with large nationwide companies with a lot of funding behind them, and thus can potentially be forced out of operation. Govnerment intervention in the private sector can help small businesses with subsidies or zoning laws to hinder the spread of larger corporations to communities where small businesses are vital. This allows small businesses to remain competitive against their larger rivals.
In contrast, some may believe that government regulation in the private sector can go too far. For example, employers may be required by law to provide fulltime employees with health coverage, despite the size of the business. This can disproportionately impacts small businesses that do not have the profits or funds to cover their employees’ health care costs, on top of the additional costs of operating a business: retail space, electricity, shipping fees, employee pay, merchandise costs, and more. By allowing small businesses to decide how they spend their earnings without government interference, more small businesses will be able to a profit year after year.
Without small businesses, the United States would be a much different place. ‘Mom and Pop’ stores are what define small communities, and government assistance can prevent that from changing. In a time where globalization and next-day delivery are forcing small businesses to shutter their windows, government actors should do what they can to keep Main Street alive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'impact'
Suggestion: impact
...e business. This can disproportionately impacts small businesses that do not have the p...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Mom-and-Pop
...tates would be a much different place. ‘Mom and Pop’ stores are what define small communiti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27298850575 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86383842961 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0787627102 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272382657625 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967666334881 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467656672096 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173793659946 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274965527306 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.