Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
Excessive control by government over private sector industries has always been not very fruitful. By controlling private businesses governments do tend to undermine their autonomy and take decisions which might slow down quotidian business activities. The given prompt states that for the successful growth of small businesses, government influence over them should be minimal. I do agree with the prompt in lessening government role in small to medium size businesses. There are two major reasons which might harm small businesses in the long run with excessive government control.
Small businesses have low profit margins and if there is government interference in every possible decision that these businesses make then it would not only make to do business difficult but also produce latency in revenue making. After India gained independence the government of India adopted a socialist policy in which the government would control private industries and would tell them what to make and how much to make, autonomy of industries was thus null .Due to this policy there was no competition among the private sector and also companies were not allowed to decide their own prices for their product, thus hindering company profits. In a similar manner even small businesses had to bear the brunt of excessive government control since for even acquiring and installing a small stall required different government licenses and approvals which required excess of time and thus small businesses took a long time to make any revenues.
SME ( small to medium size businesses) are extremely volatile to market conditions, if they do not perform well they simply get vanished unlike major corporations who get a bailout package from the government ,this is because small businesses are not high volume ,high margin businesses. So autonomy is very crucial for small businesses since the entire failure of the business is borne by the owners themselves. When the market crash of 2008 happened all the major finance corporations got bailout packages from the government, but this was not true for small businesses that had to suffer major losses due to market crash Even if government tried to intervene and support small business by giving them funds it was not practically viable to financially support every small business running in the country.
In conclusion government control only proves futile for small businesses since excessive interference hampers the small companies from taking quick and decisive decisions thus greatly affecting the company’s business from being in the forefront of competition.
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- Claim In order to help small businesses thrive government should play a minimal role in private business matters 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39460784314 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75404594718 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504901960784 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.463009143 60.3974514979 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.416666667 118.986275619 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 23.4991977007 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332084475387 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152611884906 0.0831039109588 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455294333499 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223014758632 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370793482589 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.