Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
The author claims that colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. Some may claim that this is beneficial for all students. However, in this essay, I would argue that this could not be helpful, or even harmful, for some students.
Admittedly, studying at foreign countries would be advantageous for some students. The students can experience different environment, meet various people, and acquire new perspective. In modern academic field, almost every major is becoming more globalized, and such experiences are helpful for ones in that field.
However, there could be some students that would be disturbed by such mandatory requirements. Adapting at foreign environment could disturb some students from concentrating on their major. Moreover, it could be hard to afford one semester in foreign country for who has economic problems. Without decent dormitory with low cost, students in economic problems could be disturbed by cheap and therefore inferior living environment. Furthermore, thanks to modern technology, there are many ways to learn about and experience foreign culture, and cooperate with foreign scholars through internet.
In conclusion, the author’s claim, despite its merits, cannot be beneficial under all circumstances. Indiscriminately requiring students to spend a semester at foreign country would have significant downside, so it would be better to just recommend and support the students to do so, not enforcing them.
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- Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country 33
- Although innovations such as video computers and the Internet seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students these technologies all too often distract from real learning Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'claims'.
Suggestion: claims
...studying in a foreign country. Some may claim that this is beneficial for all student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 229.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68122270742 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.003236814 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606986899563 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6798075789 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.076923077 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364703550723 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137849556009 0.0831039109588 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200792501583 0.0758088955206 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219281756552 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802483540953 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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