Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Education is the learning process of values, attitidues and behavior by exploring new thoughts. A man who entitled to any institution to gather knowleadge can be known as a student. Collage and universitites are the most higher academic institution that share knowleadge. The argument provided this university student should be spent at least one semester with foreign university. I mostly disagree this argument for two reason. In below, I am going to brief explaing why I am mostly agree with this argument.
First of all, in a country, there are ample amount of university students study in the university and collages. If each one require one semester spend in foreign unversity, it will badly impact on countries migration, economy and financial level of individual students. For illustrate, a student need to minimum ten thousand usd for spend one semester in foreign country, it is difficult to manage for individual student in underdeveloped especially developing countries. Formanging tution fees, huge amount of home courrency goes the foreign cuntry that impact the economy badly.
Moreover, a country has available opportuinty like research fund, regorous accomadation, library facilities for his students, it will be worthless for student to spend semester in another country. For example, the developed country of the world like USA, CANADA, UK, AUSTRALIA, they are all well enough to providing quality education. They should not sent another country to gather knowledge.
However, someone can say against my argument, if the under developed and developinng countries don't have enough opportuinty for quality edcuation, what are they doing ? .Well, if any country have lack of quality education at that case, university should sent a particular proportion of student who are meritous and opportunity to make social value by his contrubuation not al students require. In another view, if any developed country wants to gather pragmatic culture by their student they can adopt with the argument provide here.
In conclsion, university didn't require to send all the students in foreign university rather need to sent meritous one that have ability to contribute the socity more regorously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ve ability to contribute the socity more regorously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, at least, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44897959184 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.912272792 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556851311953 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7032208937 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.941176471 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385819148443 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111623875233 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107621711798 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199287271007 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664815566553 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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