Do you agree or disagree : technology is making our lives easier
Technology is something that we can count on , which is making our lives easier day by day, be it scientific, sports, or commercial field day by day it is helping to think more extensively than ever before. The given argument is not correct according due to numerous reasons explained as.
Technology is something that is aiming to make subtle changes in our lives by inculcating various advancements like electronic wheel-chair, voice synthesizer devices, internet, nanotechnology,etc. which were previously thought impossible are now posible due to the modernization of the technical section.Technology, aims to make us think in a way like never before. Previously researchers/scientists were spending hours of time even days to just go through the library referring for various scholarly articles unlike nowadays when these research articles are just a click away from them, they can utilize their precious time "saved" in developing high end technology which is surely gonna benefit our current as well as posterity in many un-imaginable ways.
Due to this technical advancement we are now able to see technologies like nanotechnology, advanced astrophysics, which were at times thought to be non existent and even impossible. As we know that how nanotechnology is transforming our lives by making our lives even more simpler than ever by reducing the sizes of the daily equipments like laptop computers, mobile phones,televisions,etc are all such proof of the nanotechnology.Unlike, the conventional physics, chemistry,biology that researchers studied in the old times paved a way to subject what is known as material science which is in itself a multi-desciplinary subject which aims to develop new materials to enhance the way of living.
As stated above we can now learn tons of vocabulary at just our finger-tips through apps unlike the old days when people used to study hours and hours giong through cumbersome dictionary, thesauraus,etc.Now we can save this precious time in pursuing our interest in other subjects of importance that require attention for the betterment of our society.However, at times technology can also become the reason for complicating our lives more complicated like spreading violence through internet, prolonged usage of social media sites may cause thinking impairment, sometimes people can become more dependent on technology that they may become more and more lethargic, however these cases are very rare .
Hence, in conclusion I want to restate the fact that technical advancement in very much important for our overall well being as gadgets,techniques are made available which at point of time in history were not considered true.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2280.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49397590361 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62186375355 2.79657885939 130% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556626506024 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.186823857 60.3974514979 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.333333333 118.986275619 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.1111111111 23.4991977007 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179626628094 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791355243229 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592694653269 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104475937417 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383843092327 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 14.1392134831 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 48.8420337079 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.45 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.