The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
The citizens represents a country, so it is vitally important to take care of the well-being of the people living in that country. So, who are responsible for the well-being of the country’s citizens, the answer is the leaders. The more effective a leader will be the more effective a country will be. Because good leaders always pays attention to the need of the citizens and in turn the create a milestone in the development of the country.
The leaders are the one who passes policy for the welfare of the people. For example, senior citizen pension scheme to help old people who are above 60 years, schemes to provide help to farmers in case of natural hazards and also, there are policies to provide financial help to those students who wants to study till graduation and whose parent’s income are less than six lakhs per annum. These policies are not only helping citizens but also providing a better opportunity to excel in their life.
Also, It is necessary for people to choose their leaders wisely. Because in democratic country the citizens are the one who are ultimately responsible for their life by electing a leader. A good leader always care for their citizens and bring reforms wherever necessary. For example, bringing social reforms such as setting the minimal age for both boys and girls for marriage, eliminating dowry, considering crime for harassing woman, etc shows the effectiveness of leaders. Leaders are also somehow responsible for woman empowerment by bringing many policies such as right to education for women, healthcare polices for pregnant women, gender equality, etc. Government is also trying to provide them some skills by several governmental projects to start their own work and be independent.
If there were no good leaders then there would not have been any development inside country. It would have impacted not only citizens but also country on a global scale. In order to become developed, a country needs to have good leaders who can represent the country globally. Thus, we can say that a country’s effectiveness is best measured by examining the well-being of that country’s citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'represent'.
Suggestion: represent
The citizens represents a country, so it is vitally important t...
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Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...to the need of the citizens and in turn the create a milestone in the development of the c...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t their own work and be independent. If there were no good leaders then there w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09295774648 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80831649559 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4167228109 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.352941176 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333950864163 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129909731826 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18556388639 0.0758088955206 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242682528634 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192867614869 0.0667264976115 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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