Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Anticipating problems is an important measure that should be adopted in anything a person does, specially when we talk about public politics, that have impact on the lives of many. That is why the government should not just focus on solving the problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
To start, the governments role on the society has an notable importance for all of it’s members. That includes services that are essential for the citizens, what includes planning the future. Creating a sustainable world requires social, financial and environmental politics, and a responsible government should work to meet this requirements.
Furthermore, the inobservance of this practice may result in the failure of the state’s politicians and it’s removal from their offices. Currently, technology gives to the society tools in order to monitor the politicians work, and to participate on their projects and actions. The same way people worry about their own future, this concerns are also present when following the elected representatives politics. Therefore, that is for sure an important issue politicians are obligated to deal with. Their political survival depends on it.
For instance, the social security is a major problem that governments all over the world have to solve and balance, from time to time. That happens because the number of people available to work and the number of people depending on the social security changes form one decade to another. In other words, people creating profit in a society and people depending on this profit have to obey a simple rule: a balance must be achieved. If a country has too many people depending on the money generated by a small parcel of labour force, the economy is likely to crash. To illustrate that, there are the recent events happened in Greece. The greek government did not take enough precautions, and the greek’s public budget just collapsed, meaning people stopped receiving the basic amount necessary to their survival.
To sum up, the importance of foreseeing issues and taking measures to precent them resides on the very basic principle that a sustainable world has to be pursued in many aspects, including the governmental one. If the politicians fail to do so, the first thing that may collapse is their career, but this lack of responsibility could have far more serious implications for the society. To be fair, solving the problems in the present are as important as anticipating the problems of the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...roblems of the future. To start, the governments role on the society has an notable impo...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the governments role on the society has an notable importance for all of it's...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ponsible government should work to meet this requirements. Furthermore, the inobs...
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Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'representatives'' or 'representative's'?
Suggestion: representatives'; representative's
...also present when following the elected representatives politics. Therefore, that is for sure a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.200968523 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88358918073 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2278312796 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.052631579 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178388468451 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623041953128 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123202607015 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119752658433 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118081982289 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.